I was just about to update when I found the reply. I have fixed the spelling, and I have also added the idea of quests to the description as well as to a scroll in forest: the entrance as well as a scroll in forest: 1s pointing out where you get your first quest.
There are also two new rooms in the grotto and the count of rooms required to finish the hold is at least 10. also the speculation at the end is for players who mastered the hold to complete it
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×not knowing that they did not have to
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×This is a bit of foreshadowing I am thinking of doing a sequel The city of secrets and little things like that I will won't to use
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×probably more than once
. Though on the city of secrets, I would make it for anyone to help with
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×specifically with different mini holds inside it, each probably focusing on 2-4 main elements.
I would want to set the framework myself IE: preparing the city, preparing the underground tunnels which would connect some of the homes in the different areas, which for example would allow you to go to an abandoned house, outside of which a little boy was stuck all night because of something gazing out the window.
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