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Or, if no one minds, I can make the last room in this level, and then Chaco can start the next one?

Go ahead, go ahead. Your rooms are really good for being your first ones.

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Kevin_P86 wrote:
Or, if no one minds, I can make the last room in this level, and then Chaco can start the next one?

Go ahead, go ahead. Your rooms are really good for being your first ones.

Thanks!

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Ok, I added a room to 1N5E. I don't think its as good or as challenging as some of my other rooms, but I think it's still pretty good .

There are no more empty passages now. I think all that needs to be done to this first level is (assuming it's possible), there needs to be a reason to complete the trapdoor puzzle in 1N4E (and, of course, if it's not possible, it needs to be changed so it is possible). The easiest way to make it necessary would be to put a monster between the red doors (a brain, or a roach, maybe?).

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By the way, I think this next level should have a different style - preferrably Deep Spaces, mostly because I don't much care for Iceworks...

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Exactly the idea - I was getting a bit sick of Foundation. And this level is a little bigger than most levels. So, I'll go play your room then upload the next version, with a new level.

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But i love Iceworks me!

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Maybe on the third or fourth level, Jeff.

Anyway, the new version is up! Deep Spaces puzzles are now in session, and I have started by contributing a mud room that isn't that hard.

Also, I cleaned up some of the room entrances, added descriptions to both levels, and made Tokyokid's trapdoor room pass-through-able, conquerable, and not required. Also, many minor aesthetic changes were made.

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TokyoKid's turn!

(if i can, i'd like to make the next level when that one is full!)

EDIT: I want to be after tokyokid!

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And I will go again after that.

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Pass!
NOT a trapdoor puzzle!

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I hope you don't mind me making your trapdoor puzzle optional Tokyokid.

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I hope you don't mind me making your trapdoor puzzle optional Tokyokid.

Sure, I don't mind

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Your just-added room was pretty nice. Would you mind adding your room scroll to the Entrance next time?

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Considering there was only the one scroll in the entrance, and it happened to contian the name of the person who did design the entrance room, I can see how it might not be entirely intuitive that it was to be a level map and not simply identifying that the entrance was made by Chaco...

Not that that is definitely what caused the confusion, but it's a possibility anyways.

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Ok, let me work on this.

EDIT: PASS! Put scroll of tokyokid's room, and added a beam-eye room.

EDIT (2): Add me in the list of the next makers.

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PASS!!

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You need to attach the .hold file, rather than the .player file...

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Whoops

Sorry not completely sane at the moment.

Here is the correct thing

Some mod points may cheer me up

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PASS!

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Okie Dokie! It may take a while as i might try a new scripting object.

BTW, how was my beam eye room?

PASS! New scripting room! I name it the Serpentron!

Based on the square a snake is on, a door toggles. It's pretty complex at first, but... you'll get used after a few tries.

BTW, tell me how this room is, too!

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So is it anyone's turn now...?

Jeff:

The evil eye room was pretty good. It isn't very difficult, as long as you're careful. The guard-killing-halph thing works, of course, but there are what I consider more elegant ways to ensure you lose after waking an eye. For example, a script that simply strikes an orb, closing a door blocking the exit when an evil eye wakes.

The serpentron room was interesting, however the scripting (although rather intuitive in concept) ends up being rather arbitrary and sporadic. However, that is not necessarily a bad thing, because even if you could predict intuitively when the doors would open or close, you can't really do anything about it anyways, because they open and close so rapidly. It would probably help to make the snake's area larger, still keeping the four floor types, just making each one larger. That would make the doors open and close less frequently, and more predictably.

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No one is currently signed up

So first come first serve:

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I'll do it again! >=)

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Go ahead

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PASS! added brained queen room.

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If I have time tomorrow, I'll go next.

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I just finished my Labyrinth of Mellenfral entry. If I have time, I'm going after UrAvgAzn.

Also, I have to beat all the rooms added so far. Just because.

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ORDER:

Tokiokid
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