DyRsOfDh14
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File: The Great Adventure.hold (2.2 MB)
Downloaded 67 times.
License: Public Domain

It's not finshed but I want you to see it!
It's called the great adventure and I put it some crazy things XD

EDIT: hold modified
EDIT: again
EDIT: and over...
EDIT: and over again ¬¬

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[Last edited by DyRsOfDh14 at 04-26-2009 04:15 AM]

Neather2
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Not bad. It is short, but i liked it. It seems the city Beneath but some parts were better for the add of the images (like the beach, the cars...)

The puzzles were easy but enjoyable. Very nice start.

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DyRsOfDh14
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Neather2 wrote:
Not bad. It is short, but i liked it. It seems the city Beneath but some parts were better for the add of the images (like the beach, the cars...)

The puzzles were easy but enjoyable. Very nice start.

thank you very much

DyRsOfDh14
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Please comment! I want comments!

Neather2
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Don't make people hurry. Give them the time for play, judge your hold, and think what they want to write for you there. Remember that there are thousands of holds and people can't play only your. Also, people don't spend all their time here.

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Conspiracy, my new hold, has just been released.

bdwing
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I still have not finished the Cliffs of Dover level and your hold is not Anyone Edit so I cannot see any later levels in this hold.

1N2E has the tar blobs placed in such a way that the player MUST solve every room between here and 2E. It is impossible to go through the room from the south after the room has been solved.

The snakes in 1S keep getting blocked by other snakes. I can see what I am supposed to do but have not (so far) been able to do it.

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DyRsOfDh14
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I will modify soon, now not because I don't have it on this computer

Jacob
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The main reason I've not tested your hold is that it is 9Mb.

Edit: Sorry, now 2.2mb

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[Last edited by Jacob at 04-25-2009 10:21 PM]

DyRsOfDh14
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Jacob wrote:
The main reason I've not tested your hold is that it is 9Mb.

Edit: Sorry, now 2.2mb

So what? (sorry I can't understand)

agaricus5
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DyRsOfDh14 wrote:

Jacob wrote:
The main reason I've not tested your hold is that it is 9Mb.

Edit: Sorry, now 2.2mb

So what? (sorry I can't understand)

A 9Mb hold is quite a large file; if you don't have a fast internet connection (not everyone has Broadband), it could take a very long time to download.

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deftriver
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I've enjoyed it, I've found all the puzzles to be easily completable, even if it takes two attempts sometimes.

My only comment thus far is:

I'm not sure what you're going for on the Cliffs of Dover 2S1E.

I'll be waiting for more.

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[Last edited by deftriver at 04-29-2009 04:42 AM]

bdwing
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In Dark Caves Once North there is a blue gate. It is easy to get passed the blue gate using the floating platform without solving any other rooms in the level besides this one. Also, is Dark Cave Twice North required? The "exit level" message never appeared for me until I entered this room (which is after the blue gate).

There are some spelling errors in the hold and also some foul language. In Abduction Once East it should be "It escaped.", not "It scaped."

edit: I think I am flabbergasted by your hold. Abduction 2N2E is impossible. Beethro cannot backtrack through 2N3E because there is no way to cut the gel.

Going around the other way, I got the blue gate to drop. Abduction 5N1E is surely impossible. Beethro cannot backtrack through 4N2E because of the force arrows.

All of that seems intentional.

That space maze is positively evil.

In The Magic Camps Beethro is unsworded in all rooms. In SOME rooms there are ways to kill the monsters. In other rooms there is no way I can see to clear the room. Standing on oremite floor or non-oremite floor makes no difference. Beethro stays unsworded. Either there are more tricks to this level (like the last two levels) or the hold cannot be completed.

Would it be possible for the next version to be Anyone Edit?

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[Last edited by bdwing at 04-27-2009 11:03 AM]

DyRsOfDh14
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File: The Great Adventure.hold (768.2 KB)
Downloaded 64 times.
License: Public Domain

Ok, here you are

deftriver
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I imported that and couldn't edit. Also The Magic Camps 2N doesn't appear solvable, you can't place a mimic on a door, open or closed.

DyRsOfDh14
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File: The Great Adventure.hold (2.2 MB)
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deftriver
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Also, in the Magic Camps 1S, could you put even one checkpoint in? Even if it's single use it would come in handy when I've come so far.

Okay all of this refers to Magic Camp, so I'm stuck, since I can't edit I can't go anymore forward. 2N does not appear possible, I also don't see anyway to open the doors in 2E.

Okay, I'm going to work on 1S, hopefully I'll get somewhere and 2N and 2E will become solvable or someone will show me the error of my ways.

I've been working on the snake room, it's the rattlers, they just coil themselves up, and since they aren't like the adders or snakes that just locks them in place. I can get close, but then there's always one that does it anyway.

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[Last edited by deftriver at 04-30-2009 05:35 AM]

deftriver
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So I saw a post about anyone edit, but I still can't. Anyone?

Blondbeard
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Don't bother. For some reason DyRsOfDh14 interpreted your comments as "I think the hold is ready for the holds board, and you don't have to tell me about handing it to the HA's!"

No, but seriously I don't think he handled this very well. IMO he should at least have thanked you, and informed you that he don't want any more testing. This hold is curently on the HA board.

DyRsOfDh14
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File: The Great Adventure.hold (768.1 KB)
Downloaded 53 times.
License: Public Domain

Sorry for no posting, Blondbeard is right. Here you are:

Insane
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Edit: Re-posted on Holds board

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[Last edited by Insane at 05-10-2009 09:42 PM]

slimm tom
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Insane, have you noticed that this hold has already been promoted to the hold board? Just saying...

Insane
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Oh, no I didn't.
That makes me feel kind of stupid. I should check the dates more..

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[Last edited by Insane at 05-10-2009 09:34 PM]