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(b) No. I don't think that will have a positive effect.
Why not?

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Someone on Greenlight said:
Description needs proofreading. Screenshots make me confused, not interested. Needs more coherent presentation before I'll buy it.
I could indeed find one mistake in the text.

The level layout is has multiple hub areas to explore.

I don't know, maybe adding some partial screenshots to show some game elements more clearly would help, if that's allowed.
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I agree, it's not entirely clear from the screenshots what everything is.

Also, if we're looking at proofreading -
The description seems better tailored to someone who knows what drod's about and is interested in the plot.

Maybe it would be better to spend more words describing the way the game works and the kinds of things you'll encounter(Rock giants! Bombs! Goblins! etc)

Also I'm not sure I get the sentence about Gunthro being "the guy".



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Damien wrote:
Tim wrote:
(b) No. I don't think that will have a positive effect.
Why not?

You know, I have been reading Greenlight comments for a while, and with flash games, the most common response was: "Steam is not for flash games, keep your flashy stuff to Newgrounds."

Besides, we're not porting the flash version to Steam, so I don't think it's wise to give people the wrong idea.

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Especially when the flash version has some nice features the "real" game doesn't...
09-06-2012 at 10:57 PM
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