Thanks everyone for the comments about my hold
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I am always trying to improve but this time I seemed to get it wrong.
I am glad for the comments and have look over all of them. I did have two issues but they are not excuses I just wondered if I had played the full version would I have done anything different, I guess I won't know until then.
Using the build feature was the first time I saw the weather feature and darkness features so I guess I estimated them wrong. On my computer they were not that dark and I wanted the spooky graveyard theme to be there. Good to know in the future, but what do you recommend? Cancel the weather or lighten the rooms?
Also, that you needed to pick only one pressure plate to feature came up after I had most of the hold done. I PM'ed NiroZ once I suspected it and he confirmed my fears. I redesigned the hold picking just one to feature but it was better when I used all three.
Some rooms were much harder with a once-use pressure plate instead of a multi-use, but I had to pick one that worked for all the puzzles. This is almost like Lighthouse having to pick only one light color to work with.
I think I would change the room layout now to something simpler but I wanted to provide a way to see all the rooms without playing them a feature I have missed in other holds in the past.
I tried to make the rooms more interesting and difficult but at some point I can't play them to know if they are win-able, so I am stuck there. I was glad that it was not the hardest hold that won this time.
I want to do better as I said and I really liked mine but without testers there is no second opinions so you get self deceived. If there is more you can say to help me please do. If you would rather PM that is fine, I really want the feed back.
Once again congrats to the winners!!
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