Quarce North Quince West - Might be nice to add a Visibility Token so the player knows where the solid walls are.
Quarce North Sence West - Instead of using scripting and some orbs, how about using a couple of pressure plates to open the snake doors? The puzzle will be mostly the same, but the player will be able to tell what happens before they actually start going forward.
Sence North Thrice West - Much better. The pit image is now yours, but we still have the puzzle of figuring out where the walls and pits are.
Once North Quarce West - it's not exactly obvious when the orbs will trigger, so again, I suggest using pressure plates so that the player knows that they just have to step on them to open the doors.
Quarce North Septence East - staircase ends hold instead of going to a "
hub return"
room. After backtracking to the tertiary hub, you are stuck because the bombs come back.
That's probably enough to fix for now. But I must say, now that the problem spots have been sorted out, the hold shines a bit more as a whole.
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