Neather2
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Finally, nearly ended my first one hold created via Journey to retood hold demo, many rooms to end, I am employing much time for the creation of it, I do not know the reason. Some my friends of class help me with some rooms, drod, they have known it via me, and I via others….they are helping me with some mazes nell hold simple but pretty to us, with monster, the classic (in really I would not have preferred that one), but I know does not appeal to to you so much. Also I have ended the creation of an ally Guard who aids (speaks to you) for who does not know the game in the level of the tutorial well, and 1 I hope and creed in the last level in order to use it type neather, I hope that you good and that it is soon ready!

Good Day!

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Elfstone
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Well done Neather2. I'm looking forward to playing it.

May I suggest you ask someone do a bit of testing before you post your hold here? That's what I did and the advice I got from Hikari was very helpful. It means that any obvious problems with the hold can be corrected in private, before you let everyone on the site look at it.

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Neather2
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I don't Understant...

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Lst6
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I do, He means that if you have CaravelNet you might want to let someone test the hold in private by signing him as beta tester. In case you don't then a option is to send the hold to another person via PM or email him (or her). Then when you get the feedback, you fix what you need to fix and post then here in the board.

Well, I look forward to play your hold.

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Neather2
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Lst6 wrote:
I do, He means that if you have CaravelNet you might want to let someone test the hold in private by signing him as beta tester. In case you don't then a option is to send the hold to another person via PM or email him (or her). Then when you get the feedback, you fix what you need to fix and post then here in the board.

Well, I look forward to play your hold.

Lst6 thanks! Understood Elfstone, In the next levels, but for hour in the first not servants, I have controlled same and played, no problem, even in the next ones. Thanks the same one!

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Neather2
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Uh, small question: Preferred within the maze classic, or with monster, simple and not boring?

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UrAvgAzn
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Neather2 wrote:
Uh, small question: Preferred within the maze classic, or with monster, simple and not boring?

Your English is getting better Gianluca! I prefer the rooms with the monsters, because I am making a maze and it isn't fun. I will show it to you soon, just so you can see what it'll be like. Good day, Gianluca!

Keep posting,

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Thanks! Now, i go to build a hold, and a pretty Maze!

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Jeff_Ray...
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But don't make it too maze-ish or else people might not like it.
Try to go for challenging puzzles, for i like them. If you need any beta-tester, send me an e-mail. (jeffreymaher9(at)hotmail(dot)com)

Replace dot and at with the appropriated symbols, this to avoid my email to be a spam magnet.

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Neather2
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Ok, now i finish the tutorial, first level and second level, now i build the third...

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But don't forget we hate maze levels!

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Jeff_Ray... wrote:
But don't forget we hate maze levels!

ok, I do not create this.

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Neather2
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The level is 9, now i create the ultimate level,
in this hold :

Tutorial
First Level (Roach and tunnels)
Second Level (Roach, and more...)
Third Level (In woods)
Fourth Level (Goblins Attack!, tunnels and a one mini puzzle.)
Fifht Level (Mimic, moster and mimic garden)
Sixth Level (Hall of Guard and Slayer)
Seventh Level (War)
Ultimate Level (...)
A maze To exit (Moster, Puzzle and door.)Not difficult.


Bye!

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Jeff_Ray... wrote:
But don't forget we hate maze levels!

Is this the singular "we", like the royal one? Or are you speaking for all of us? Not that I have a thing for mazes, but I don't dislike them either.

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I'd beta test too, if you set up a board.
And oh, mazes are o.k.

Neather2
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Uh, ok, i create a moster and puzzle maze.

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File: Adventure Of Beetrho and Guard.hold (16.8 KB)
Downloaded 68 times.
License: Public Domain

Ended! I have eliminated 2 levels of this, the last one and the maze, is in creation of one new, makes it along, this is short.


This!

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Uh, looks good I guess. Besides for the exesive itailan.

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Neather2 wrote:
Ended! I have eliminated 2 levels of this, the last one and the maze, is in creation of one new, makes it along, this is short.


This!

Davvero carino, ma cambia i dialoghi in inglese. Aggiungi più puzzle e metti una scala x saltare il tutorial.

Oh,tokyokid, it's not spanish, it's italian.

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I could, but I cannot be all the day with the translator….I do not know so much English… I'm sorry ….but I cannot. I hope that they understand… But a lot then enough that they end the game… Sorry...

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File: Adventure Of Beetrho and Guard.hold (16.6 KB)
Downloaded 59 times.
License: Public Domain

Indeed not, Made! I have inserted the Stair for the First level, Put the arguments in English, but inasmuch as you know the game, the trusts are remained in Italian: Here the new version…

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tokyokid wrote:
Uh, looks good I guess. Besides for the exesive itailan.

Editing The italian, Bu the scroll remain in italian...


ah, hour is in creation of one new, but still at least 1500 rooms to make….but that one is in Italian… excused.

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UrAvgAzn
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Hi Neather! Spero che otteniate migliori all'inglese. Ora sto utilizzando un traduttore. La vostra stretta è molto buona. Sto giocando con esso ora. Spero che possiate capire vi assottigliate, perché relativo non un traduttore molto buon. Dovreste fare più strette!

Invio di conservazione,

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In the description you spelled retood wrong. Its Rooted hold.

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tokyokid wrote:
In the description you spelled retood wrong. Its Rooted hold.

I think we can cut him a little slack on that one, tokyokid; the translation thing he uses *always* turns Rooted into retood for some reason.

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Neather2
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UrAvgAzn wrote:
Hi Neather! Spero che otteniate migliori all'inglese. Ora sto utilizzando un traduttore. La vostra stretta è molto buona. Sto giocando con esso ora. Spero che possiate capire vi assottigliate, perché relativo non un traduttore molto buon. Dovreste fare più strette!

Invio di conservazione,

Sono gia' in creazione di un altra , piu' grande, piu' livelli.

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Weird, turns out Rooted is uprooted in Google Translator!

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UrAvgAzn
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Neather2 wrote:
Sono gia' in creazione di un altra , piu' grande, piu' livelli.

Buon! Faccia più livelli. Solitamente, più grande il migliore. Forse voi e me potete fare un momento un ten insieme. Ed è questo traduttore buono? Capite che cosa sto dicendo? Poiché sto utilizzando un traduttore.

Invio de conservazione,

P.S. Dovreste ortografare “il retood„, Sradicato.

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Neather2
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Si capisco, Grazie

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Italian

Buon, Gli darò più osservazioni sulla vostra stretta più successivamente. Ma per incominciare, non potete completare la stretta se prendete le scale al primo livello nell'entrata d'istruzione. Poiché ci sono stanze tranquille nella lezione privata che devono essere conquistate, così non potete rifinire la stretta. Dovreste cancellare le scale nell'entrata d'istruzione. Grazie, arrivederci!

Invio di conservazione,


English

Good, I will give you more comments on your hold later. But to start with, you cannot complete the hold if you take the stairs to the first level in the tutorial entrance. Because there are still rooms in the tutorial that need to be conquered, so you can't finish the hold. You should delete the stairs in the tutorial entrance. Thanks, bye!

Keep posting,

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