bomber50
Level: Smitemaster
Rank Points: 872
Registered: 09-18-2006
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Re: King Dugans Tomb (+2)
Not a very good hold.
It feels that the architect just slapped down a bunch of walls/pits/monsters. The use of trapdoors under tar would be criminal back in the AE days, but nowadays it's not so bad.
Many of the rooms are quite trivial, and not very interesting, which is a consequence of the seemingly random placing of monsters. The best room is probably Treasure Hunt: 1N2W, which if a solution was more enforced, could be a very interesting room. Optimizing it is interesting.
The spelling/grammar, while not much of it, is not very good. Things are unnecessarily placed in CAPS. "Your far away from the finding the treasure...#" in the first level description uses the wrong "your", and in the last scroll, mechanisms is spelt "MECHANISMNS". Perhaps the worst though, is in the hold description, telling you to "dig around in his funeral". That doesn't make a lot of sense.
2.5 Brains, 2 Overall
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