Nitpicks and worse:
http://forum.caravelgames.com/viewsitepage.php?id=203429#features Under "
What Will I Be Able"
... "
When you conquer a room in less steps than anybody else"
, "
less"
should be "
fewer"
. Also, it's one of the commonest misconceptions among outsiders that H&S is restricted to paying CaravelNet members, when it is mostly free to all, and you seem to be furthering it. Likewise, one need not be a member to submit holds, only a forumite.
http://forum.caravelgames.com/viewsitepage.php?id=203429#sshold Actually, one may download Smitemaster's Selections via the Purchases tab in one's forum profile, since one might purchase those but not a CaravelNet membership.
http://forum.caravelgames.com/viewsitepage.php?id=203429#hints I suggest noting that one can still ask for hints despite this if one can click the room in the first place, and that workaround for secret rooms with the forum search.
http://forum.caravelgames.com/viewsitepage.php?id=203429#beta Actually, in every beta board there is a download link for the latest version near the top of the page.
http://forum.caravelgames.com/viewsitepage.php?id=203429#startbeta Secrecy definitely isn't the only reason to use a beta board, though it was likely the original purpose. Larry Murk, e.g. IIRC, has put all his holds in beta boards since they became available.
http://forum.caravelgames.com/viewsitepage.php?id=204506#misc "
suppost"
should be "
supposed"
.
http://forum.caravelgames.com/viewsitepage.php?id=204506#smilies The colon you have in parentheses shows up as
. Disable smileys in that post, perhaps?
http://forum.caravelgames.com/viewsitepage.php?id=204506#holduploaded I'd suggest warning them that the HAs have to approve changes, and they don't remove unintended solutions. Also, something bugs me about the title's grammar, but I can't quite specify it...
http://forum.caravelgames.com/viewsitepage.php?id=204506#hints Definitely warn persons about secret rooms being hidden without CaravelNet progress uploaded, and possibly the secret forum-search workaround.
http://forum.caravelgames.com/viewsitepage.php?id=204506#rules "
By the same token, making fun of other people's punctuation is probably a bad idea too."
Given that previous exhortation to use proper spelling and whatnot, this may warrant removal.
http://forum.caravelgames.com/viewsitepage.php?id=204506#nextversion "
now would you."
should be "
, now would you?"
http://forum.caravelgames.com/viewsitepage.php?id=204506#injokes This section should really just be a link to
here. Note that that page needs to be updated with
Bad Evil Restaurant and with the 1.4.2007 Illumination prank. Oh, and mention
That Really Annoying Hold and
Good Nice Restaurant, while you're at it. Ooh, and that potato too. Please.
http://forum.caravelgames.com/viewsitepage.php?id=202765 Under Scripting, "
all"
should be "
I'll"
.
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[Last edited by Jatopian at 09-12-2007 02:53 AM : Done!]
(nice update by the way, Ezlo, you're doing a great job filling Patrick's shoes)