Wow.
I've just played this, and the ballroom looks really incredible. The way the tar moves while you wait is beautiful.
The room with two babies was hard, I did have the feeling that I was using a lot of tricks in there at once.
The room with the mimics was really interesting, as I did not realise what was happening after it was too late. (Big plus for that.)
This idea has a lot of potential. I think you can make a lot more out of this. At least you should.
Try to look for some more ideas in the existing snake puzzles (the "
snake run"
holds, for example) And you might want to concentrate each room with just one or two ideas. Currently it just feel cluttered.
PS. In the room with the mimic, what was the mimic puzzle? Did you intend to have me killed both the brains with the mimic first? Because I did not have to do that...
Otherwise, a very nice hold.
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