Jason
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File: The Tomb of King Lenchen.hold (14.8 KB)
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I'm making another series. The first one is called "The Tomb of King Lenchen".
"The Descendent of King Lenchen" is almost ready. Here is "The Tomb of King Lenchen"

EDIT: Descendent at bottom!

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[Last edited by Jason at 06-12-2006 01:08 PM]

UrAvgAzn
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I'll get started on this right away.
You should really make more planets on Beethro the Space Commander, though. It was a really good story and had puzzles.
Please upload some holds to the hold page.

Keep posting,
-Jeremy

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UrAvgAzn
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Well, this is a really good hold. I can see you making a trilogy out of this. I have nothing but a few suggestions:

1) Make a trilogy, its a good hold.
2) Catacombs was well, really unoccupied. Good idea, very annoying maze.
3) Oh yeah, you should keep all your holds on one page, labeled the Jason page or something. I can't imagine someone with dial-up who loved your holds but couldn't get to the page that fast. I know, I had dial-up before, its terrible.

Keep posting,
-Jeremy

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Such grief, such joy, to live at all."
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Jason
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UrAvgAzn wrote:
3) Oh yeah, you should keep all your holds on one page, labeled the Jason page or something. I can't imagine someone with dial-up who loved your holds but couldn't get to the page that fast. I know, I had dial-up before, its terrible.

What do you mean on one page? Like I create a topic and put all my holds on it? Wouldn't that make it hard to find each hold on the page?

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Banjooie
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Well, what we'd do is, we'd make a bunch of posts and add attachments to them, all in one thread.

Then we'd edit the first post with names of all your holds, and link them to the attachments, so they don't have to scroll down.

Result: victory

UrAvgAzn
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Like so.

The Jason Page
The Tomb of King Lenchen
Star Wars Episode 6
Beethro The Space Commander
Beethro's RPG
Impossible Defence
The Defeat of the Goblin King

Keep posting,
-Jeremy

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Jason
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Got it!

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File: The Descendent of King Lenchen.hold (21.9 KB)
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Here is "The Descendent of King Lenchen!"
Tell me how you like it!

EDIT: bugs fixed

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[Last edited by Jason at 06-14-2006 01:24 PM : bugs fixed]

bandit1200
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The Descendent, Getting Back, I can only get 83% explored and can't see any way to get to any more rooms. Am I missing something, or is there an unreachable room?

Jason
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bandit1200 wrote:
The Descendent, Getting Back, I can only get 83% explored and can't see any way to get to any more rooms. Am I missing something, or is there an unreachable room?

Ohhh. Know the problem. New version! Look back up there for the new version.

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Jason
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It is possible. Do you want a victory demo?

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File: TDoKL Getting Serious 1N Victory.demo (1.4 KB)
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Here

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Jason
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Thanks.

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Hikari
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Descendent, Middle Level 3N1E, I can't seem to figure out how to get the scripting to behave so I can get past the room. :X

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Jason
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What can you do to a wubba (not blowing it up)?

Do it!

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