×Level 13:
1. Quarce North can be skipped.
2. Special movement of the platform beside walls, pits and land is not explained.
3. Weighed down platforms (serpents, rattlesnakes, adders and rock giants) was not explained, but you could always just do that on a later level.
4. As well, you did not explain that wraithwings can go over water and that you can knock monsters off platforms.

Level 14:
1. Once North, Once West: "Conquer" is spelled wrong.
2. Once North: You did not explain the special movement of gel babies.
3. Entrance: You should talk about the fact that the direction that the rotation token will change the force arrows changes when you use it.

Level 15:
1. Twice North: Briars grow slower near pits. They can destroy you and monsters. They don't destroy adders, rattlesnakes or serpents. None of this was explained.
2. Twice North, Once West: You did not explain that rock giants can't go through 1-wide areas and you didn't explain that they weigh down platforms.
3. Thrice North: You didn't fully explain oremites. Stepping off them puts your sword facing the direction that you stepped off it.

Level 16:
1. Twice North: A beginner might not understand the fact that the fegundos can destroy monsters and Beethro and that they can be destroyed if they explode on pits.
Thrice North: TAB does the same thing as clicking.
Thrice North, Once West: Speed potions and hot tiles?

Level 17:
1. Builders can do a lot more. They can make and remove other things. They can build things as well.

Final Level:
Secret room on every level? There's no secret room on the Final Level.

×The explanations are very, very well done! However, I still noticed a few things.

Level 15: Once North: Gel babies, Tar babies, Mud babies, Serpents, Adders and Rattlesnakes are all unaffected by hot tiles.

Level 15: Twice North, Once West: If you go to the secret without conquering the room, you can't finish the level.

Final Level: Once West: "Except" is spelled wrong.

Lastly, I now realize that you didn't quite use all the elements.

You didn't use the vision token, disarm token and persistant citizen movement token.

But it's a great tutorial that a beginner could easily figure out.

×
L14: 1N. I'd change "hell" to "hazardous", but that's personal opinion.

L14: 1E. Conquer tokens haven't been explained as a "must" to drop green doors in your text, though it has in example in a room.

L15: 1N. All tarstuff babies are unaffected by hot tiles.

L15: 2N. Rattl[e]snakes, unaffected.

L15: 1N 2W. I don't like non-exitable rooms without borders. Personal thing.

L15: 3N 1W. I feel like more mirror explanation is necessary.

L15: 3N. Or[e]mites.

L15: 3N 1E. Aumtlichs? The plural is unestablished. May be Aumtlich. Like fish. There's a thread in General discussing this.

L16: 1N. Say for how many turns. Note that the ashes are destructible?

L17: Entrance 6 comes before Entrance 5.

L17: 1N 2E: press ctrl+5 to wait 30 turns. Current text is somewhat misleading.

L17: 1E: "guards".

×
First Delver! (I was the first non-tester/dev
to conquer TCB.)
d/dy

×This is water. Water is almost exactly like a pit, with few exeptions. - exceptions
Most other objects (Including monsters) will fall off of a platform when moved. Force arrows are unnafected by this. In addition, platforms can move against the flow of force arrows. (Though you still can't.) - unaffected
The more roots that are connectd to briar, the faster it grows. - connected
Serpents, rattlesnakes and adders are unnafected by briar. - unaffected
There is a secret room on every level of this hold (Exept for this one.) . Did you find them all? - except
Those gaurd in yellow are called stalwarts. They're on your side. Watch them beat the guards. - guard