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kieranmillar
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Just beat Floor 2 The Caves. End of level timer said 2 and a half hours!

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08-31-2014 at 11:26 AM
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Floor three: Took 2:15 according to the level end clock. Level comments in the order they were beaten.

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09-02-2014 at 07:35 PM
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Back again.
I modified some things and added more checkpoints as requested:

- Floor 3, 1N: Slightly modified.
- Floor 7, 1W: Modified a bit to prevent a US.
- Floor 8, 1N1E: Modified a bit.

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09-04-2014 at 07:04 PM
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Textual notes on Level 8:

1N1E

Character at (2,7) has an empty script.

Character at (33,27):
* Second and third lines are too long. Split each into two lines.
* Full stop after "whatever".
* "But why wasting my time telling you the answers, you will not leave this place alive. You should have not stand against the league of shadows." -> "But why waste my time telling you the answers? You will not leave this place alive. You should not have stood against the league of shadows."

Character at (1,14): Beethro would not address his enemy as "master". If he is using the title sarcastically, put it in quote marks; otherwise take it out.

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More long lines. Some of them don't have a good place to break, so you could leave them.

* "Can I know" -> "Can you tell me"
* Full stop after "protect this place"
* "into the hell's core" -> "in the hell's core"
* "suface" -> "surface"
* "could have die" -> "could have died"
* "an hell" -> "a hell"
* "back to surface" -> "back to the surface"
* "Yes I see" -> "Yes, I see"

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Also, I finally managed to conquer the first level :D Feels awesome to have that done at last. Like Kieran, I'll list rooms in the order I solved them.

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Overall, that was an excellent level, 7 brains and 9 fun :thumbsup

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