×1N, 1W, 1E, 1N1W, 2N, 3N1E, 3N2E, 5N, 3N seem a bit tacked on. They all follow the same pattern - walk into a room, kill the few monsters, leave 2 seconds later.

Entrance - This is better, it isn't too tricky to trap the snake with the wubbas. (although I've seen that puzzle in many other holds)

1N1E - you might want to put a checkpoint on the right side of the room somewhere, since that's where the snake can get killed. (by the way, the aumtlich isn't required, the snake can die in the bottom right corner by itself, but this isn't any easier than using the aumtlich)

* 2N1E - the brain isn't needed, guards already have their own internal brains, and are unaffected by it.

* 2N2E - this is a little more challenging. The tarstuff clearing was quite tedious though. Definitely needs more checkpoints. And the bombs hidden under the dark felt a little cheap.

2N3E - good

* 2N4E - serpents don't kill inactive clones, so switching to the other clone and waiting for the snake to die makes the room very easy. If you don't want that to happen you should use an adder.

4N1E - was going to complain about the lack of vision token, but then I noticed it in the corner. You might want to make it more noticeable. This room was otherwise good, and not tedious like 2N2E. I didn't need any checkpoints but you might want to move the 2 already in the room, to more helpful locations.

2N2W - you might want to increase the difficultly here a bit by adding an obstacle at (28,6) and increasing the length of the rattlesnakes.

* 4N - entered the room from the left North entrance, pressed all the pressure plates and killed the aumtlich. You don't need the disarm token or the hot tile. You should block the entrance from 5N, to prevent the unintended solution.

4N1W - not hard at all, but okay.

3N1W - what is the point of the master doors?

5N2W - okay. The spinning mimic is a bit pointless though.

×3E - Not bad. Don’t know that the queens add anything.

2E - Liked this, but the backtracking problem (as mentioned above) should be fixed.

1E - filler

Entrance - Not bad

1W - The only challenge here is finding the optimal solution.

1N1W - Filler

1N - Trivial

1N1E - Filler

1N2E - Not bad. Can be solved from south entrance.

1N3E - Okay. Solved without using gates

2N4E - Okay alternate to 2N3E, but I never had to enter the "roundabout" or use the arrow tokens. Just stayed by the entrance and switched between clones.

2N3E - Good.

2N2E - Some people play with fx off, and besides, it's a cheap "trick". You could find a more creative idea for the gel part.

2N1E - Filler

2N - Bit more challenging but still felt like filler

2N1W - Very easy.

2N2W - Filler

3N3W - Not bad but hard to go wrong.

3N2W - This is a nice puzzle but I think I broke it, or is the hot tile a red herring? I simply let the adder eat the guards and then I stepped on the token, broke the wall, trapped the adder and killed it.

3N1W - Not bad, but what's the master gate for?

3N - Filler

3N1E - Filler

3N2E - Was I supposed to use the pressure plates?

3N3E - Okay

4N3E - The addition of a skipper nest seems like an afterthought.

4N2E - Accessible conquer token makes the optimal solution trivial. Also having to wander about hitting orbs is tedious since it adds nothing to the puzzle. And since I've already stepped on the conquer token before going to the upper chamber, the pressure plates there are irrelevant. The top part is good, the rest is just tedium.

4N1E - Okay

4N - Released the aumtlich and mowed them down. Hot tile unnecessary as is that odd chamber with the sword token and pressure plate.

4N1W - Okay horde room. Good for optimizers

4N2W - Good

5N2W - Is the mimic supposed to do something?

5N1w - Interesting scripting, but a bit tedious. Involves just guessing when to start and once you've got that it's just a matter of making your way through.

5N - Filler

5N1E - Since the brain is killed before exiting with the mirror, it adds nothing. Also don’t need the ‘hideyhole.’

×Overall:
- I found the environmental effects annoying and turned them off.
- What is the point of the "conditions"? It's not tied to scripting. Why not just put a blue gate across the ramp in the exit room?
- Couldn't find the 2nd secret room. I thought it might be accessed from 1E with a platform, but no. Is it accessible?

2S1W - I found this room tedious but there are those that enjoy this sort of thing. But more annoying is being unable to exit because of the obstacles at the western edge of 2S that add moves as you bump against what seems to be an open edge. I suggest moving the rocks in 2S one space farther east or putting matching obstacles in this room.

2S - Cheap trick. If you're going to keep it in you might want to tweak the scripting. I only "heard" it because I was wandering and then I had a hard time finding the spot to get the rest of it.

1S1E - Mirror is not needed.

1S - I guess the gate and potions are decoration? Seems odd. If you're going to keep the "condition" thing (maybe actually doing some scripting so that the player had to "collect" the scrolls or something) then the explanation scrolls should be in the entrance. The puzzle itself is trivial.

1S1W - The only "puzzle" here is working out where to start. The clearing of it is trivial and because there's so much gel and it’s all the same layout, it’s kinda tedious. I can't help but feel that with a bit more thought, this could be interesting.

1W - Simple. Not sure why you need the non-hot tile squares though. This could be tighter.

1E - I used the mimic to block the giants long enough so that I can get to the rattler. But what are the platforms and pressure plate for?

1N1E - Nice puzzle. A bit messy. Not sure what the NE arrow is supposed to accomplish.

1N - The trick here I guess was to get into the upper chamber without a snake following? Not bad. I have a feeling it could be broken.

1N1W - Not a difficult puzzle but not bad. Having to do the exact same thing twice though? Meh. Maybe change the second part or lose it.

2N1W - Filler.

2N - Okay, but repetitive.

2N1E - Not bad, but mirror is not needed. Not sure why there are golems there. They don't add anything.

2N2E - A bit messy (ex: arrows under briar, mirror and bomb unnecessary) but okay. It is possible to solve without using the extra mimic potion if you want to make it a bit more difficult. Might be more interesting that way. Regardless, I would suggest adding a checkpoint in the first section (where the tar blob was).