Krishh
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Dined

The_Red_Hawk
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happily

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Slashing, whirling, diving, twirling,
Snapping, turning, rising, swirling,
Screeching, flipping, gliding, sliding,
The red hawk's dance of death.

.....the king of the skies.....

DiMono
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again.

(I SWEAR those last two posts weren't here when I made mine...)

[Edited by DiMono on 06-10-2004 at 04:30 AM GMT]

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Deploy the... I think it's a yellow button... it's usually flashing... it makes the engines go... WHOOSH!

agaricus5
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Mr.

Some of the previous sentences have been a bit odd. Try to check what you are posting fits in with the rest of the sentence gramatically, and that you have not missed a subordinate clause, for they tend to be long in this story.

[Edited by mrimer on 06-15-2004 at 01:47 PM GMT]

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Resident Medic/Mycologist

The_Red_Hawk
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Helen

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Snapping, turning, rising, swirling,
Screeching, flipping, gliding, sliding,
The red hawk's dance of death.

.....the king of the skies.....

Schik
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changed

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The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way it treats its animals.
--Mahatma Gandhi

The_Red_Hawk
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drastically

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Screeching, flipping, gliding, sliding,
The red hawk's dance of death.

.....the king of the skies.....

agaricus5
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when

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The_Red_Hawk
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creepers

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Screeching, flipping, gliding, sliding,
The red hawk's dance of death.

.....the king of the skies.....

agaricus5
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constricted

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The_Red_Hawk
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pythons

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Screeching, flipping, gliding, sliding,
The red hawk's dance of death.

.....the king of the skies.....

gamer_extreme_101
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consisting

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--That guy with a million different aliases since he doesn't like this name anymore.

The_Red_Hawk
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of

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.....the king of the skies.....

doink~
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static

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Doink ~ Doink ~ DOink DoInk DoinKK~~~

DiMono
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electricity.

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Deploy the... I think it's a yellow button... it's usually flashing... it makes the engines go... WHOOSH!

The_Red_Hawk
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If

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Snapping, turning, rising, swirling,
Screeching, flipping, gliding, sliding,
The red hawk's dance of death.

.....the king of the skies.....

Krishh
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only

The_Red_Hawk
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the

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Snapping, turning, rising, swirling,
Screeching, flipping, gliding, sliding,
The red hawk's dance of death.

.....the king of the skies.....

agaricus5
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Midget

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The_Red_Hawk
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Maniac

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Screeching, flipping, gliding, sliding,
The red hawk's dance of death.

.....the king of the skies.....

Nillo
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had

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“Folks say that if you listen real close at the height of the full moon, when the wind is blowin' off Nantucket Sound from the nor' east and the dogs are howlin' for no earthly reason, you can hear the awful screams of the crew of the 'Ellie May,' a sturdy whaler Captained by John McTavish; for it was on just such a night when the rum was flowin' and, Davey Jones be damned, big John brought his men on deck for the first of several screaming contests.”

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tweed

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Screeching, flipping, gliding, sliding,
The red hawk's dance of death.

.....the king of the skies.....

DiMono
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underpants,

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agaricus5
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Pierre

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doink~
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toasted

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SKWERLL
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toasty

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SKWERLL? MORE LIKE THE DORK CHEESE!

The best hold in the world!

Stuwy
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lemons

The_Red_Hawk
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and

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Snapping, turning, rising, swirling,
Screeching, flipping, gliding, sliding,
The red hawk's dance of death.

.....the king of the skies.....

DiMono
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barbecued

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The_Red_Hawk
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turnips

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Slashing, whirling, diving, twirling,
Snapping, turning, rising, swirling,
Screeching, flipping, gliding, sliding,
The red hawk's dance of death.

.....the king of the skies.....