goldenferret wrote:
OK, so...
Is it ready to go?
Edit: Yay! 2 pages.
Well, it all looks complete to me.
Final comments: You might want to put some actual hold end message for the final staircase -- when the hold ended at the end of Homeward Descent, I assumed it was another premature ending until I looked in the editor and determined that I was all done.
All rooms are conquerable, hold is masterable. Difficulty is fairly low and consistent throughout.
Minor bug: The script in the Entrance to Magnificent Penthouse repeats every time Beethro walks into the room.
Josh
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Rings and knots of joy and grief, all interlaced and locking."
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