Jeff_Ray...
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Alright, so I have some random comics. I'll post them as I do 'em.

Comic #1: Don't mess with gel!


EDIT: Since SuperV's got his pictures in, I decided to give him a place in.

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I don't get the point of the comic. Could you explain me what happens there? It looks as the gel is blowing the roach away.

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Hmm... I'm starting to get a bit tired of you calling Gel for Sucky, and of how you repeatedly points out that you made a sugestion for Gel (or Sucky).

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Alright... >_> I'll take out the author's commentary... <_<

Meckmeck: The roach finds a gel mother. It says hi fool to it. The gel, not liking the comment, makes a mouth appear and says "DIE!", scaring away the roach. The gel mother, then mocks the roach in her thoughts.

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I hate to say it, but... It wasn't funny, it was poorly drawn, and to put it simply, it was a complete waste of the 5 seconds. I know you're young, (I still don't know how old exactly, somewhere in the range of 8-12?) but you honestly should put some effort into what you do.

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I know, I've got poor art skills.

But I'll TRY, and I say, TRY to get better with the time.

EDIT: Maybe if I published my hand-drawn comics, it will maybe look better... what do you think?

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It's not that they look bad (I don't care one way or another how they look.) It's that they don't have much effort put into them. You need to keep making them if you want them to be good though.

Though if you want them to look good, I'd recommend getting the The GIMP. It's free, and it's a pretty good program. It won't turn it into an artist overnight, but it's still pretty useful. (And anything's better the MS paint amiright?)

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Jeff_Ray...
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I know, but restrictions prevent me from downloading programs without permission.

But what about I publish hand-made comics? I'm sure you will find they are of higher quality.

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zonhin
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'kay, post away.

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I've redrawn the comic on a paper, I just need to color it and to scan it on the CPU.

Progress: 33%

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With practice there is improvement. If you don't have a stylus or a good eye and hand control, Paint can be horrendous to work with. Hand drawn probably be better if yuo get it to shown up nicely after it's scanned, as many tend to look washed out, probably can touch it up a bit afterwards.

The script was kinda weak. How I'd make it funny - the roach has a sudden sex change and becomes a roach queen, Gel says fool, Gel gets mob rushed by Roaches. Probably.

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Yellow_Mage wrote:
With practice there is improvement. If you don't have a stylus or a good eye and hand control, Paint can be horrendous to work with. Hand drawn probably be better if yuo get it to shown up nicely after it's scanned, as many tend to look washed out, probably can touch it up a bit afterwards.

The script was kinda weak. How I'd make it funny - the roach has a sudden sex change and becomes a roach queen, Gel says fool, Gel gets mob rushed by Roaches. Probably.

Ah, yes, nice, family friendly comics



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Jeff_Ray... wrote:
I know, but restrictions prevent me from downloading programs without permission.

Okay, so step one before doing anything comic-related would be to rectify this... that, or getting your own computer.

Because if the only serious paint tool installed on that machine is MS Paint, there's not much hope for scanned-in material either...

np: The Go Find - Monday Morning (Stars On The Wall)

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The hand-drawn comic's not coming on until at least tonight, due to dumb problems with the scanner.

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Here's mine. ( If it can be understood as a "comic" )



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vittro wrote:
Here's mine. ( If it can be understood as a "comic" )

I actually laughed at that.

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I am sheating, I'm sheating!



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Gold.

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I added the guard.

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He's cheating? or sheathing?

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My attempt at JTRH cover


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Good job! It's not as good as the actual TCB cover, but that was pure awesome.

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Jason wrote:
He's cheating? or sheathing?

Huh?

Also, zohnin, obliouvsly that it's not good as the real one, I'm making these just for fun!

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Beethro in smiting action



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These are nice, but don't draw everyone away from my art, ok?

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Beethro! What have you done to his head! A stab was ok!



I will make portraits for TCB soon.

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Hehe...


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vittro wrote:
I will make portraits for TCB soon.

To be honest... I can't wait (: .

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Can I post a comic? I really want to. I even made one already!

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