Not bad at all for a first hold, well done!
Here's some comments:
Forest of the world tree:
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1N: Good introduction. It's possible also by killing a goblin right away, intended?
2N: Best room of the level and of the whole hold so far, I really liked the lynchpin here.
2N1E: Not a big fan of these rooms but it's ok, not very hard.
2N1W: Didn't needed the WW here, I used gel babies to help me carve a good shape.
3N: Easy room.
Mountain of the world tree:
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Entrance: Ok room
1E: Not my type of room, but this changes from player to player.
1N1E: Good room
1S1E: Can be broken by standing on (9,0) because I can lure the roach on the west arrow and then kill all seeps near entrance.
1S: Liked this one.
2S: I'm missing something obvious here, I can easily avoid EE's but then I die as soon as I become slow again since there's no way to prevent the SE zone to be filled with roaches. Can I have a hint?
Overall:
I liked the aesthetics and also good checkpoints position.
Keep going, great job so far!
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There's not some other world out there where everything's gonna be okay.
There's just this one, just this rock.
-33th Skywatcher