mako
Level: Disabled

Rank Points: 3
Registered: 12-11-2011
IP: Logged

Try the first level of this dungeon an see how it feels.
EDIT: added monsters and checkpoints now its anyone edit and I added levels 2, 3, 4, 5.
I am changing the holds name to A Silly and Regretable Mistake.
It is now in Beta stage.

____________________________
See ya later losers!

---

[Last edited by mako at 02-21-2012 12:41 AM]

Blondbeard
Level: Smitemaster

Rank Points: 1486
Registered: 03-31-2005
IP: Logged

Entrance: Very easy (which is okay)

1N1E: Also very easy.

2N2W: Ehh... What? Just run to the top of the room, and wait for a lot of turns. How is that funny or challanging in any way?

3N1W: What's the point?

3N2W: Another easy room.

4N2W: Perhaps your best room IMO.

Passage to walk through: I don't really like walking through passages were nothing happens.

In conclusion: very easy level with rooms that feels like rooms I've seen before. This does not feel like a good level, but maybe it's a good first step toward becoming good at making DROD holds.

mako
Level: Disabled

Rank Points: 3
Registered: 12-11-2011
IP: Logged

Done that.

____________________________
See ya later losers!

mako
Level: Disabled

Rank Points: 3
Registered: 12-11-2011
IP: Logged

Yes there will be 3 levels with a flashback and 2 other levels.

____________________________
See ya later losers!

---

[Last edited by mako at 02-20-2012 08:55 PM]

12th Archivist
Level: Smitemaster

Rank Points: 789
Registered: 12-07-2008
IP: Logged

mako wrote:
Yes there will be 5 levels with a flashback and 10? other levels

Might I suggest your first project be a little less ambitious? You will be happier if you can focus on a much smaller set of potential puzzles and potential bugs and whatnot.

Besides, who wants to fill a deadline? Build rooms until you feel satisfied with your work, not until you satisfy some arbitrary limit. Trust me, your hold will be better off.

____________________________
It was going well until it exploded.
~Scott Manley

Check out the DROD Wikia project here!

Garlonuss
Level: Master Delver

Rank Points: 276
Registered: 06-28-2004
IP: Logged

Okay, first off, you don't really need to worry about trapping Beethro against the black gate on First Level: 3N1W, but if you really want to, you should extend the black gate up one more square. With the diagonal arrow, you can just go diagonally up and get out.

____________________________
Haikus are easy.
Sometimes they don't make much sense.
Refrigerator.