burgerboy99
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thes is my new hold coment end rate thx

its goign to me 25 levls long i hope but it will taek me awile

more comming soon

burgerboy99
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sory it didnt work ill try agen

burgerboy99
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its not woking ill uplod it somewere else

EDIT: HEAR IT IS

http://www.sendspace.com/file/fhnqaw

ennjoy

hyperme
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0. It took my like, 30 seconds to find a downlink on that site that actually downloaded the hold.

1. Spelling errors. I'll assume English isn't your native language, but corrections:

rotted hold = Rooted Hold
were is my swod = Where is my sword?
i rebember = I remember
i cant see = I can't see.
aha ther u are = Aha there you are!
ahh whos that = Ahh who's that!
ah finaly ican see = Ah, finally I can see
you haev

Oh god resarting the room ain't fun.

2. Set this to Anyone edit or You and Conquerors

3. All dark rooms = BAD. If the player can't see something due to darkness, you've used to much.

4. You can''t get through rotted hold: 3N1W with a sword.

5. This isn't even a DROD RPG good puzzle type thing. No choices, no risks, no anything in the second level.

6. Make a way to go back to levels if there are items you can't get the first time.

7. RPG holds aren't sized by level. It's also quite hard to have a content filled 25 level RPG hold that continues to be fun.

Of course, you're probably going to ignore this and fail. But I can hope.


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