Some general spelling:
The text at the beginning:
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× "The slayers are lot. For first thing go..." should be: "The slayers are many.
For the first: go...".
"And look the place." should be: "And take a look at the place".
"For second, Search a passage..." should be: "For the second, search for a passage...
The Gate of the City:
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×The level should be called "City Gate"
The City:
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×At 3 North:
"Excuse me, But the Slayers City is so small?" should be: "Excuse me, but is the Slayers City so small?".
"the slayer have destroyed this." should be "the slayers has destroyed it."
"Oh...And the mosters?" should be: "Oh... And the monsters?"
"The Slayers are the responsable for them too!" should be: "The slayers are responsible for them too!"
"you have asked my for the..." should be: "you have asked me about the..."
"The slayers have block the first way for the palace." should be: "The slayers has blocked the front road to the palace."
"They you are, Bye citizen!" should be: "There you are, bye citizen!"
1 North 2 West:
"A Slayer accademy?" should be: "A slayer academy?"
"If i are a slayer i can enter sure in her palace." should be: " If I am a slayer then I surely can enter the palace."
Aumtlichs Cave
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×The Entrance:
"Bad, This time is not easy." should be: "Bad, this time it's not easy."
2 North 2 West:
"This Aumtlichs will help me, i think." should be: "These Aumtlichs will help me, I think."
"This is your last room, mr. Budkin." should be: "This is your last room, Mr. Budkin."
The Gate of The Palace:
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×The level should be called "The Palace Gates"
2 North
"You can't reach my palace, budkin!" should be: "You can't reach my palace, Budkin!"
"Oh no! I was so nearly!" should be: "Oh no! I was so near!"
2 North 1 East:
"I have lose." should be: "I have lost."
".....I need found another way for the Slayer's Palace" should be: "I need to find another way into the Slayer's Palace."
I didn't find anymore spelllng issues. And also, I really liked the hold.
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[Last edited by Pneh at 02-08-2008 05:33 PM]
