Eyetanz declares:
My only complaint is that it lacks polish
I would
strongly contest that! I polished it quite well, but when I put it in the water, I found that no amount of smoothness or shiny things can fix leaks.
I did look for and quash as many of the "
NPC-left-the-room-but-is-stil-there-when-you-return scripting errors"
, but I allowed "
NPC-hasn't-finished-what-he-was-saying-or-doing scripting redos upon re-entry"
, simply because I didn't want errant exiting of a room to let players miss some vital jibe between characters.
Since I'll be allowing backtracking/adventuring in the next hold, I will keep your critique in mind, because small things bug me too. Maybe I'll lock the player in a room for every event