I'm done for today, actually watched up to the 12th video. The first person i know that can do that is Chaco, whose hold is awesome and the athmosphere great, but he is problably busy. I tried to do like him, but I can't
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Well, again, thanks for your play. I've corrected a lot of errors that it had
I'll start to search the person after the errors are solved.
Finally, the story complete.
THIS TRY TO TELL DECENTLY THE STORY, DO NOT OPEN IF YOU DON'T WANT TO BE SPOILED (dunno if you could care about it) DO NOT OPEN IT:
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Werl was sailing randomly in the sea for some days, and when he saw an island he sailed and took a rest in a some lake it had. A citizen came when he was sleeping and he awake in a prison.
After he have a meet with the protector, who seems to be the boss and left unintentonially the door of the prison opened, Werl escape from there and before he read a diary, of another person who also was jailed there.
He go to the ground and first floor defeating monsters, and to the mud stores, there he found also a scroll where it say that he was being chased by the forgottens.
In the next levels there are just monsters, but in the tunnels he found a person alive, and that's a digger, he says to Werl that he can't say anything about the orb and he can't allow anyone to exit the castle.
Werl try to go to the fourth floor, but a forgotten appear in front of him, telling that they are the forgottens, that they are inmortal (in age), and that it's forbid to them to tell where the portable orb is, after he go to the tar stores and the dungeon, in the dungeon he found a diary saying that the dungeon is older than the castle and it's enormous divided into some levels.
Next place where he goes is the goblins lands, where he discover that goblins are living in the castle for some reason (I don't mention it) and that the person who was chased was thought dead by the forgottens. So when they saw him were surprised, and gave him the chance to join them, he accepted because he had at least some food and drink like the goblins.
In the frozen storages he discover that the gel was stronger than the forgottens, but also more inestable to the changes, because of that they sealed it in a frozen place, to stop his change and avoid any problem, the person stayed there for some months, but he could die frozen, so he went out.
Next place where he goes is the fifth floor, and before he have some words with the protector, who don't allow him to reach the town. After the defeat the protector dissapear, so Werl think it's just a shadow a powerful indeed.
In the town he use wisely the grappling hook, the town is a very good fort and very well defended, so he need to use it if he want to get power. Straight up in the town there is the jail, that's where he came from.
After he discover the architect, who says to him that they turned selfish cause the inmortality that the orb gives, and tells Werl to end it, and give the card that is needed to acces the deepest dungeon.
Werl go to the third dungeon and end both of the protector shadows and the forgottens that defend the deepest dungeon, Werl enter there.
He discover that the deepest dungeon is in a different place, and with some dimensional monsters and warriors, this is supposed to be a place beetwen dimensions where the warriors who inhabit here are very powerful.
He finally find the true protector, that told him the person who write the diary is him, and that he was a normal person before, but with some ritual he turned into one of them. He gives Werl the option to live with them. Werl also tell him that they didn't give any other way to solve it.
[ If Werl decide to live with them they appear in a scene like 1 week after the events happen, where he go to take some water with the protector, he says they are still a little scared about if he escape or not, he tell that he don't want to return again, for some unknown reason]
[If Werl decide to kill the protector, after he is killed he left some soul, the forgotten soul, an "entity" that all the forgotten have, but the one of the protector is very powerful and try by all the means to defeat him. After it's defeated Werl take the orb and go out of the castle. He return to the "boat" and go to home]
The diary story chronologically:
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×The person left the prison in a unknown way (it's not mentioned), and he go first to the mud and tar stores, after he found a teleport and use it to travel fastly beetwen the areas trying to avoid the forgottens, who chased him until the frozen storages, where they never went in.
Some time after the go out of the frozen chambers and stays in the goblin lands for a while, he isn't a menace for the goblins, so they don't mind about him. He saw some forgottens giving food and drink to the goblins, the forgottens also saw him and asked him to stop the chase, he accepted because at least he could live decentlly.
He went to every area of the castle, and finally discovered the orb, but for some reason he prefered to protect it about to take it and leave the castle, the forgottens did a ritual to him and made him to have a very powerful soul, and so he turned into the protector.
If this isn't clearer, i just don't know what to do
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A moment last forever, an eternity passes in an instant, the time I spent here was inevitable...
[Last edited by Suwako at 05-02-2013 07:02 PM]