khaim100
Level: Master Delver
Rank Points: 123
Registered: 07-01-2005
IP: Logged

File: war the truth within.hold (1018.5 KB)
Downloaded 66 times.
License: Public Domain

ok

CuriousShyRabbit
Level: Smitemaster
Rank Points: 3171
Registered: 10-14-2006
IP: Logged

I've played this one.

I don't have time to comment on all the rooms right now. If you would like to see my comments, please let me know, and I'll come back and add them later.

The Wilderness level is rather chaotic, but it is also very open. I don't think there are any backtracking problems there. I hope some other players will check me on that one. If there were any problems, they would be due to the ability to run through rooms that are solvable from only one entrance. The other three levels are skippable, and that's fine.

Half 2N is an empty, inaccessible room that should be deleted.

Wilderness 1N2W and Zonk 1S have cutscene scripts that I can "defeat". I enter these rooms, wait for the cutscene to be over, exit, re-enter, and then conquer them without waiting through the cutscene.

Oh, and the mimic-clone puzzle in Tonoy 1N1E is different and kind of neat!

Zorglub
Level: Delver
Rank Points: 74
Registered: 10-08-2007
IP: Logged

I didn't see any backtracking issues neither.
I liked also the "half on a hot plate" idea in half-Entrance.

khaim100
Level: Master Delver
Rank Points: 123
Registered: 07-01-2005
IP: Logged

do comment, csr, if you listed anything.
yea, i made sure each room has multiple entrances so the only issue could be side rooms were you have less ways of coming in and out. the side rooms are pretty well straightforward. i guess i'll fill that extra room. i dont know about the one-time cutscenes but thats ok, they are there for the show

khaim100
Level: Master Delver
Rank Points: 123
Registered: 07-01-2005
IP: Logged

File: war the truth within.hold (1021.9 KB)
Downloaded 50 times.
License: Public Domain

few small fixes

Tim
Level: Smitemaster

Rank Points: 1979
Registered: 08-07-2004
IP: Logged

I'm not testing this hold, but let me just say here that I've already found 2 rooms that I'd say "backtracking".

I'd suggest you to leave the hold on the Architecture board for some while before submitting.

____________________________
The best way to lose customers is to let little kids running loose on a forum with too many mod points.

khaim100
Level: Master Delver
Rank Points: 123
Registered: 07-01-2005
IP: Logged

File: war_the_truth_within.hold (1020.1 KB)
Downloaded 50 times.
License: Public Domain

fixed the corner rooms

khaim100
Level: Master Delver
Rank Points: 123
Registered: 07-01-2005
IP: Logged

File: war_the_truth_within.hold (1020.1 KB)
Downloaded 45 times.
License: Public Domain

i connected the rooms in question to tackle the backtracking concerns.
i added one also at upleft corner