ZiomASek
Level: Roachling
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Registered: 11-12-2008
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Well...
Thats my new hold people...
and ummm...
im not doing another in this week.
maybe next week.
enjoy

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mxvladi
Level: Smitemaster
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Look, you don't have to make a million of holds in the same time. First, try to make a normal hold, submit it(when you got enough feedback), and only then start doing new hold. Normally, a normal hold sits in architecture for about 2 weeks. Or even more. Only after that it can be submitted.

Another thing: the main problem of new architects is probably that they don't understand how pieces(i.e monsters&game elements like hot tiles or oremites) work together. Try reading some topics about monster movement. Remember that brained roaches can be placed in such position that they won't simply be crushed with player's sword. Aumtliches aren't simple things with beeams. They all can be used better than you use. That's just s tip: read more help topics, play more hold... but keep trying anyway. You're at least getting better...

ZiomASek
Level: Roachling
Rank Points: 12
Registered: 11-12-2008
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well i think now im not gonna make anymore holds

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mxvladi
Level: Smitemaster
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Hmm... I've reached the arena level. This level reminds me of my hold, Cludo's arena.

Anyway, previous levels hadn't much puzzles. More slashing than thinking. I'm very sorry to say that, but... that's all I can say.

mxvladi
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ZiomASek wrote:
well i think now im not gonna make anymore holds

Why? Because I said that you don't probably understand how elements can work together? You shouldn't stop doing holds because of this. Instead of that, you should keep trying. Things you should note when doing next hold:

1. Desing. Even very easy hold can look nice if it's well-designed. Don't make emply rooms. Make some walls, pits, obstacles, doors etc.

2. Less hack&slashing. Hack&slashing is actually quite fun, but when there's A LOT OF it, it's boring. Try to do not so much monsters. Thanks.

Good luck.

(EDIT: Oh well, I meant that you should play some holds first)

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vittro
Level: Smiter

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mxvladi wrote:

ZiomASek wrote:
well i think now im not gonna make anymore holds

Why? Because I said that you don't probably understand how elements can work together? You shouldn't stop doing holds because of this. Instead of that, you should keep trying. Things you should note when doing next hold:

1. Desing. Even very easy hold can look nice if it's well-designed. Don't make emply rooms. Make some walls, pits, obstacles, doors etc.

2. Less hack&slashing. Hack&slashing is actually quite fun, but when there's A LOT OF it, it's boring. Try to do not so much monsters. Thanks.

Good luck.

Nope. I think he's right, he should stop making holds for A WHILE. He needs to play the game more first.

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