The Architest
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File: Stalwarts March Devils Castle.hold (8.9 KB)
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You play as Stalwart and you must escape form prison,and when you escape you want kill that who put in that prison..Simple?!

It is my dumpest hold,where my friend helped me


<-----Click it and see how dump it is

Update : Fixed rooms & removed some & made some stuff
Update getting stuck thing!
Update : Mxvladi is in credits
Update : Changed some rooms!!!
Update : uncovered.ogg is fully removed from my computer!

No more updates coming!

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[Last edited by The Architest at 08-20-2008 02:11 PM]

mxvladi
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2,4 megs?!


I definetily might play it.

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Warning :
It is too dump,so It might kill your brains!

All Comments are free

mxvladi
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Underground prison: etrance. Is it okay that I killed stalwart that helped me?

EDIT: No, it's not okay, since NPC's script doesn't end after that. Fix that, please. Thanks.

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[Last edited by mxvladi at 08-19-2008 10:05 AM]

mxvladi
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It seems that saying "that your hold is dumb" you're having a mistake.

It's quite easy, yes, but better than, at least, "Dungeon master".

I'm on first level now...

Good job for now!

Specific room comments will come soon.

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File: SMDC Underground Prison 1S2E Victory.demo (1.3 KB)
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License: Public Domain

1S 2E: I found the unintended(probably) way of solving the room. Mirrors were unnecessary, and room became a little hack-and-slash. I've attached the demo.

Is this way okay?

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Wow!

I didnt know that!

Fixed version coming when fixed some roosm

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Comment going on the first level:

1E: Nice room. I didn't move mirrors. Did you?
1S: NIce, too, but easier than 1E(and the rest of the rooms in this level).
1S 2E: See my demo. I guess intended way was more beautiful. Umm... and why brain?
1S 1E: Pretty cool, but you used this puzzle in many of your other holds. Tip: don't use the same puzzle in different holds, try to think out something new. There're a lot of combinations with adder and tarstuff. Try something new. Maybe you will even change this room...
2S 2E: Umm... This room spoils the level. It's not that enjoyable and probably easier than other rooms.(and Slayer is dead, of course)

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Devil's castle outside:

Etrance: pretty easy.
1N: I've escaped in 22 moves.

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Highest tower:


Either my ears hear music quite bad, or you use deep spaces sounds in it. Isn't caravel music copyrighted?

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Devil's castle inside:

1W: First time I thought it was really challenging, but then I realised I can use one of alcoves to kill roaches easily. So, quite easy room.
1E: Speed poiton is unnecessary, I think.

Underground:

1N: Quite clever idea. Though masses of mud spoil this room a little.
2N: Why hot tiles? To kill goblins? I didn't use hot tiles to kill goblins. Remove them, please. Thanks.
3N: Nice, nice...

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Hups...I remember what Credit mean

Im gonna removing it right now!

PS : I through I must put Eriks name to credits!!

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What about solution to underground prison 1S 2E? Was it intended?

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Once South Once East: Stalwart Puzzle
Twice South Twice East : Mud/gel Puzzle

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Uh... I'm not sure you've changed 1S 1E to gel puzzle. You've changed 2S 2E.

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What the... if I do 1S 2E, then go to 2S 2E, I can't return!!!!

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*Fixed*


PS : Hold making is hard job

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The Architest wrote:
PS : Hold making is hard job

Yep.

mxvladi
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You've fixed it indeed.

I see no problems with the hold. You can even submit it now... but I would recomment waiting for some days or for a week or two.

(Also, I would recomment adding my name in the credits. )

EDIT: Since it has imported custom copyrighted music in it, submiting must be delayed until it's not removed.

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Architest...

I wonder why this hold has 2,4 megs size.

Maybe because you didn't clearly delete deep spaces music?

Try making some NPC, going in script "Set music" and choosing music.

If there's deep spaces music there, you might delete this. JUst select it and press "delete".
EDIT: Now I'm sure that you didn't delete copyrighted file. Do it. Follow this post.

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[Last edited by mxvladi at 08-19-2008 08:12 PM]

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I just asked the admins to remove this hold.

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mxvladi
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Architest,

Next time remember to remove copyrighted music/graphics from import list. Remember that even if you don't use it but imported it, you've already used copyrighted file and need to ask permission to use it.

Still, sometimes it's better to ask permission. For example, in case you really need copyrighted file.

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I removed Uncovered.ogg!


Any other stuff?


PS : I removed it from my whole computer.
PSS : I removed DROD-Stuff where it was!
PSSS : It is removed for sure!

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File: SMDC Underground Prison 1S2E Victory.demo (1.3 KB)
Downloaded 41 times.
License: Public Domain

Thanks for updating the hold Architest.
Now look at my demo of 1S 2E. I used horde-solution again.

You might remove mirrors, and make the room looking like:



See the img. If you'll make the room looking like in img, you'll remove all doors problems, all unintended solutions...

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The Architest wrote:
You play as Stalwart and you must escape form prison,and when you escape you want kill that who put in that prison..Simple?!

It is my dumbest hold,where my friend helped me


<-----Click it and see how dumb it is

Update : Fixed rooms & removed some & made some stuff
Update getting stuck thing!
Update : Mxvladi is in credits
Update : Changed some rooms!!!
Update : uncovered.ogg is fully removed from my computer!

No more updates coming!

Fixed. Dump means "throw away"!

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13th Slayer wrote:

The Architest wrote:
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Fixed. Dump means "throw away"!

Not always, according to the Cambridge Dictionaries online, it means (as a verb),

1.to put down or drop something in a careless way.
2.to get rid of something unwanted, especially by leaving it in a place where it is not allowed to be.
3.to sell unwanted goods very cheaply, usually in other countries
4.(informal) to suddenly end a romantic relationship you have been having with someone.
5.(specialized) to move information from a computer's memory to a storage device.

It has lots of other meanings when used as a noun, which I'm not going to list.

Besides, I don't think that you have to say much when it's about spelling mistakes, right?

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Timo006 wrote:

13th Slayer wrote:

The Architest wrote:
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Fixed. Dump means "throw away"!

Not always, according to the Cambridge Dictionaries online, it means (as a verb),

1.to put down or drop something in a careless way.
2.to get rid of something unwanted, especially by leaving it in a place where it is not allowed to be.
3.to sell unwanted goods very cheaply, usually in other countries
4.(informal) to suddenly end a romantic relationship you have been having with someone.
5.(specialized) to move information from a computer's memory to a storage device.

It has lots of other meanings when used as a noun, which I'm not going to list.

Besides, I don't think that you have to say much when it's about spelling mistakes, right?

Rait. :-)