I'd say it's a pretty basic hold. Great for newcomers to drod so they can see whats in it, over all your on the right track of creating a pretty fun dungeon!
However I do have some thoughts:
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1N - Put the orb maybe 2 spaces below, you can kill each goblin 1 at a time.
1N 1W - It gets a little repetitve for me since the game runs laggy on my comp.. It's still a good wrist workout
1W - If you want you could add in some bricks into tar so you could have beethro go through some maze to get to the mother
2E - Again it would be best to fill in some bricks so you don't just rip through the tar savagely to get to the orb
1N 2E - It's a good thing you put in those cracks in the wall or else my wrist would be killing me! instead of the orb try putting a monster in the red wall box and make the yellow door a green door so eventually somebody will have to do that looong room
Other than that keep up the good work!
