Anson
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This hold is great.
Try it!
Come on!
Updated weekly!

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MeckMeck GRE
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It's completeable and bug-free..... I finished it in 8 minutes. The rooms are mostly about hack and slash. Anyway, what are those nonsense talking figures about?

Suggestion: Add a few checkpoints to your puzzles.

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[Last edited by MeckMeck GRE at 02-18-2007 01:12 PM]

tokyokid
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Not too much here, but I think this is your best hold yet. I can't wait to see how you progress into a great Architect!

Heh, you're a bit like me when I just started Architecturing. I started out making a lot of holds of lower quality, then I progressed into a greater Architect. Good luck!

Tom.

Anson
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MeckMeck GRE wrote:
It's completeable and bug-free..... I finished it in 8 minutes. The rooms are mostly about hack and slash. Anyway, what are those nonsense talking figures about?

Suggestion: Add a few checkpoints to your puzzles.

Are the singers funny?

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NiroZ
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Entrance:
By far the best room in this hold. The first part of this room was really fun. Unfortunately, it loses its intensity as soon as you retreat to the 4x4 area.

2N1E
You probably didn't noticed this (most people don't) but you forgot to have a 'end' command, or even a 'end on room exit' command in your scripting. Although it really doesn't matter, it is generally encouraged to do so when you have scripting in a room.

Also, this room needs checkpoints.

2N
Nice room, could use checkpoints.

1N2E
Needs an end script command. This room is a tad simple.

2E
2 mimics make this room really simple. Perhaps try 1 or no mimics?

1S1E
I don't understand this room at all.

Anson, nice hold. You might want to consider playing KDD or JtRH to the end in order (or if you can't afford it, play the freeware version of KDD) to pick up a few more tricks.

One thing that you really need to improve on is your spelling. I know this has already been repeated ad infinitum, but that is because it is really important that you improve it in some way.

Anson
Level: Delver
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tokyokid wrote:
Not too much here, but I think this is your best hold yet. I can't wait to see how you progress into a great Architect!

Heh, you're a bit like me when I just started Architecturing. I started out making a lot of holds of lower quality, then I progressed into a greater Architect. Good luck!

Tom.

I've been working and working and i got what everyone wants

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Please, I admire Guthix, I solve problems, I fix rules too. I used to be a Scoundril, Complaining about the forums, But now i changed.

Anson
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Almsot finished!
I got the hold here!
I hope this can be done!


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eytanz
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Anson - did you see my message in the chat above? You need to answer if you want this hold to be promoted.

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