I can tell that this is a great hold!
COMMENTS
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×The rooms were pretty good.
The Job Begins
Entrance: Add an end command.
Once East: Add an end command.
Quince South, Thrice East: This room is funny, but it could use an end command.
Kherson
Once South, Once East: Add an end command.
Once South, Once West: Add an end command.
Side Passage
Twice North: Add an end command.
Twice North, Once East: This room could stop repeating when you leave it and re-enter by adding an end command. However, if there's more story in this room, then you might not have to.
Twice North, Twice East: One of these exits, the top one, leads to an end hold. The bottom leads to the Return To Smitemasters Hall level.
Return To Smitemaster's Hall
Twice North: You could add an end command.
Twice North, Twice West: Add an end command.
Basically, the only problem is the lack of end commands and a few other bugs. Other than that, it's pretty good.
[Last edited by bomber50 at 11-19-2006 02:42 AM]