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eytanz
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Easy little hold, with mostly rooms of the "random elements thrown together" genre and a simple storyline. Nothing too exceptionally good, but not too exceptionally bad either.

Good points:
- I liked that scrolls had nice, positive feedback for the player in them. Many holds of this type seem to have scrolls that are either totally random or insulting to the player, so this was cool.
- Scripting seems relatively solid, even though it suffered from the typical fault of scripts repeating after rooms are conquered.

Bad points:
- Total lack of any checkpoints.

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Jason
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Thanks for the comments. I already fixed the scripting problem and will put in a few checkpoints. Question: How do I update the hold?

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krammer
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Go to your profile, click My Holds, then Update.

I think though that because you weren't logged in when you first posted the hold (that's why it says Anonymous) you may not be able to do this... I'm not 100% sure though.

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Jason
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krammer wrote:
Go to your profile, click My Holds, then Update.

I think though that because you weren't logged in when you first posted the hold (that's why it says Anonymous) you may not be able to do this... I'm not 100% sure though.

Thanks.

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Jason
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I've got a problem because I can't update because I didn't have an account when I posted "The Defeat of the Goblin King" ! If anyone knows what to do...


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Tuttle
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I reckon your first step should be to message Schik about it.

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Tuttle wrote:
I reckon your first step should be to message Schik about it.

Why?

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Tuttle
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Because he wrote the code which handles all this stuff.

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Tuttle wrote:
Because he wrote the code which handles all this stuff.

Thanks

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