Insane
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File: Beethros Roachy Adventure.hold (32.8 KB)
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Try it out

-Insane

Blondbeard
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I find it very boring to go through that empty space time after time after time. Pleace put some stairs by the scripted mimic which leads back to level one. I think you should consider removing some of the empty space as well. The story is quite neat though

Kevin_P86
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Yes - the empty space was a little excessive and tiresome. But I only had to go through it twice - once there, and once back.

It was quite a good story, though.

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Insane
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i might invent something to cover that up, but hey, why don't you just build a staircase when you want to go to some foreign land?

-Insane

Jason
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Nice Hold! The passageways were a little too long but other than that it was a super hold!

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[Last edited by Jason at 05-05-2006 04:04 PM]