×Level 1
1E - I guess the only tricky bit about this room was dodging the roaches and tar babies right after the bombs explode. Once cleared, getting rid of the mud mother was quite easy

1N 1E - This was a combination of small, separate puzzles, and while they lent variety to the room, I think that the puzzles would be better expanded and each placed in separate rooms. In fact, you could make use of the fact that Seeps can protect certain squares from being stepped on to help you build a more difficult and larger trapdoor maze.

1N - I quite liked the backswiping technique being required for the first part of this room, although once you realised what was necessary, surviving until the bomb expoded wasn't hard. Dealing with the golems after was a bit tricky, but in such low volumes, a bit of careful manipulation was alll that was necessary to kill them.

2N - This room was surprisngly easy, since you can reach the invisibility potion within 30 moves, so stopping any growth of mud from forming. After that, dealing with the mothers was simple, and the roach could be taken care of with the decoy. Also, putting a character within two squares of a room entrance is not a good idea, since if Beethro steps on it or puts his sword over it, its script will not activate.

2N 1W - This was quite a nice room; getting the rattlesnake to follow you long enough so you can reach its tail was quite a challenge.

2N 1E - This was quite an easy room, since with some diagonal cutting, you could create a wall of rock piles to protect yourself with several movs before the bombs exploded.

Level 2

1S - The bomb avoidance puzzle here was interesting, although not exceedingly devious (compared to some of the bomb puzzles available in JtRH), but nevertheless, I liked it.

1S 1E - This was also a surprisingly easy room, since the trapdoors were very plentiful and the whole northern area of trapdoors was lined with walls and obstacles, making killing the wraithwings very easy. Perhaps reducing the trapdoor count and the number of walls near the trapdoors might make the rooms more challenging.

1E - This room was not that difficut, although it was rather tedious cutting all the tar and mud. I'd suggest placing a few checkpoints beneath the tar and mud masses so if you happen to forget the roaches momentarily and make a mistake, you won't have to replay the entire room again (Mimics can now activate checkpoints).

2W - This puzzle was quite easy too, although the idea of using a golem to act as an obstacle to trap a Wraithwing was a nice idea. However, this wasn't entirely necessary, as you could just chase the remaining Wraithwing to the egde of the room and kill it there. Adding a force arrow and a green door surrounded by pits might help solve the problem.

Level 3

Entrance - Getting the orbs was a bit tricky, but overall, surviving the brained hordes wasn't very difficult.

1S - Killing the serpents was easy, but it was frustrating to find that there was a trapdoor attached to the main room, separate to the rest of the trapdoor maze, which required a restart to reach.

2S - Like the entrance, surviving the brained hordes wasn't very hard, although the Seeps added an interesting twist to the room.

Level 4

Entrance - This was rather difficult, since Orthogonal Squares make dodging serpents quite nasty, although it wasn't as tedious as I was expecting, as there were three dead ends in the centre, which helped get rid of the serpents quite quickly.

1W - This wasn't very difficult, as you only needed to worry about the tar masses forming indestructible shapes, since technically, all mud masses can be removed entirely.

1N 1W - Using rock piles to kill serpents was again a nice idea, but not very difficult, since you had a lot of space and four golems to use.

1N 1E - I liked this room quite a lot - killing a Serpent with a rattlesnake in an open area is certainly not very easy.

1E - Reaching the Decoy potion was relatively easy, especially as your timer was quite lenient, although once there, dealing with stray roaches behind you was quite tricky, since the spawn rate is quite high, 15 per 30 moves.

Level 5

1N - This was a nice final room, although the lack of checkpoints makes it somewhat tedious. I solved the room killing the Slayer with the bomb, but I believe it is possible to complete it with the Slayer still alive, so perhaps the bomb isn't quite necessary.

× Level 1
1E This was my very first room, and somewhat just a test of JtRH elements. Probably going to change it completely.
2N Duh. There were supposed to be 2 roaches there, forcing you to place the decoy before activated the bomb. Come to think of it, the room would still be very easy, but with a little more tweaking it could get quite nice.
2N 1W That's one of my favourite rooms.
2N 1E Shortening the fuse or getting rid of the bomb at all should help this room. (forming the wall while the roaches are almost/already upon you)
Level 2
1E Didn't know mimics can activate checkpoints. That should help.
2W I couldn't think of a way to fix the brdige when designing this room. Thanks. Still would need something to make it more difficult.
Level 3
Entrance Needs some rebalancing. The first version was impossible, the second way too easy, this one's better, but still needs some work.
Level 4
Enteance I actually found the entrance quite easy, but I tried it only a couple of times, so maybe I just got lucky.
1E The timer is not there so that you can fail to reach it in time, it is there to draw you out in the open where it is harder to deal with the spawning roaches.
1E 1N This together witl Level1 2N 1W is my favourite of the hold.
The remaining 2 puzzles I'll probably change completely.
level 5
1N That's the problem I'm having with this room. You are supposed to kill him with the bomb, but there doesn't seem to be a way to allow you to end the room only when he is dead.

×The goblin is quite hard to control in open spaces, isn't it?