larrymurk
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Hey folks, can you check out this 7 room hold I made... PLEASE..

Stefan
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I must say, I was pleasantly surprised by this hold. The puzzles were not very easy and some of them were well thought out.

Room specific comments:
Start of Journey:
The Entrance: Nice and fun trick.
1E: I liked it, it required some thought.
1S1E: Once you've it was just hack 'n slash. The arrow-maze was well done.
1S2E: Nice puzzle. The way in which you kill the inner serpent wasn't obvious.

Middle of Journey:
The Entrance: Very well thought out puzzle, although there could be a checkpoint somewhere. Very specific (and somewhat surprising) solution.
1E: Suffers from the scroll size bug (I think, I haven't tried it in Windows), but that's not very serious.
Are you supposed to do the third chamber byBoth are possible, although the second is more difficult.

End of Journey:
The Entrance: Not extremely difficult, but a nice ending. And it fits the story perfectly.

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YtterbiJum
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I'm finding End of Journey to be very hard. But then again, I'm not very good with roach hordes. Is there a certain order I have to hit the queens in?

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Tim
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Wow, that was a very fun hold!!!

My comments this time are the same as Stefan's, so I'm not going to repeat it.

And YbJ, if you still need hints for the last room:

PS. There were still some speeling mistakes though. I can't remember all of them, but the most notorious one was "beech".

Oh, and to the forums.

-- Tim

[Edited by Tim at Local Time:12-09-2004 at 11:11 PM]

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rowrow
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[Edited by rowrow at Local Time:12-13-2004 at 04:11 PM]

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joker5
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A hearty welcome to the forums. I picked up and tried your hold and it taught me never to underestimate the small ones >.<

Anyway, I think I found a trivial solution to 1s2e... Was this an intended part of the room?

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rowrow
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I don't know.That is how I beat it. I can't get past that second part. Any hints?

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