zxcvboy
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I need auditions for my new hold "The Hidden Dungeon"
Roles:


First line!!!!


Other Lines


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[Last edited by zxcvboy at 04-20-2011 06:15 AM]

Yur-Val
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First, give this hold without voiced characters. Or it will be wrong?

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[Last edited by Yur-Val at 04-20-2011 10:07 AM]

da rogu3
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You don't *need* to have auditions the hold. Voice acting is mainly for official releases, and only a few usermade holds have it. It would be best if you attach your hold here, so people can play it and give feedback on how to improve it. Generally speaking you should only ask for voice acting if the hold is fully complete - that is, all the puzzles done, storyline written, and if the hold is to a high standard.

Rat Man
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Butch32 just posted that he needed a voice acting for a hold nobody had seen. I think the kids of the forum are forming a mob!

Anyway, I love voice acting, I'll act for just about anything right so I'll give you an audition as soon as I see the hold. I don't want to unless I know what I'm working with.

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Rat Man
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If you upload the hold first, I'll try a couple voices.

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zxcvboy
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File: The Hidden Dungeon.hold (2.8 KB)
Downloaded 62 times.
License: Public Domain

Here it is (first level only)

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Rat Man
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Not bad at all for a beginner. This is your first hold, yes? Well, it seems quite incomplete. Dead-ending and with several dead ends. Is this because of the limit you put on it or because it's not completed yet? And why not make the hold free?

I'd like to see more of this, but for now, here's a quick pointer. To add to the challenge of the hold, you should try to make the puzzles more complicated and require more moves and more precision. Don't be afraid to do something that might make the puzzle impossible because you can test it later! Spend a lot of time testing before assuming it can't be done and needs further editing.

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