usbdriver
Level: Roachling
Rank Points: 13
Registered: 11-23-2008
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File: The Writer of Scrolls.hold (11.2 KB)
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This is my first hold for King Dugans Dungeon (not 2.0). Please give me feed back if you try it.

Blondbeard
Level: Smitemaster

Rank Points: 1510
Registered: 03-31-2005
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My favourite things in life are NOT to walk very long passages, to be stuck in mindless repetition and being told that I suck by scrolls.

What I mean is this: If this is the kind of holds you love to play, you have succeded in creating something to be proud of, but do you really like repetition, and walking very long passages?

The scrolls might be a bit fun, but I find them too aggressive. If I was Beethro I would just quit (which is what I did when I reached the fifth level).

mxvladi
Level: Smitemaster
Rank Points: 2508
Registered: 02-11-2008
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I don't really want to be rude, but...

I've deleted hold when I've reache 1N 1E room of the first level. Reasons of doing that:

1. Your hold is "Only you" edit. Architects usually put their beta-holds with "Anyone-edit". It doesn't mean that someone steal and develop your cool ideas; it means that it'll be easier to test hold.

2. NO CHECKPOINTS. Without anyone edit, it's actually very rude to the testers. Please, add some checkppoints. I had to restart a millio0n of times(and throw it away pretty quick).

3. Quite boring puzzles, bad room design. 1N was actually quite challenging, but 1N 1E was somewhat very broing - it was no challenge, only horde of roach queens to kill. And no room design doesn't make sense.

Again, I'm saying that I don't want to be rude. No hard feelings.

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[Last edited by mxvladi at 11-26-2008 07:48 PM]

bdwing
Level: Master Delver
Rank Points: 288
Registered: 02-16-2003
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I enjoyed what I saw of this hold. Except that I don't like being told that I suck. Please remove those messages from the scrolls. Also, you may want to proofread your scrolls. Betthro? BudKing?

In Level 2 Once East please put a checkpoint. I took the top exit to Twice East and was then trapped with no way to continue except by restoring to the previous room.

The stairs in The Rescue Mission loop back to the start of the level. If there was anything after this level, I could not play it.

All in all, not bad for a first hold.

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