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zadna64
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Monster Village is my first hold so tell me if it is good or bad but of course play it because i need to improve some how. Also give me advise on how to make it alot better.

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11-21-2007 at 05:29 PM
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Have you played this hold yourself?

It appears that you are making a very easy hold which is ok.

On the first level, roach ranch, 1 South has two doorways that leed nowhere.

When you start the 2nd level you start on a pit and can not move.
11-21-2007 at 05:58 PM
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The two main suggestions I can give you are:

1. To play test your hold. Can you complete all the rooms (this hold is currently impossible to complete beyond the first room of the second level)? Are they all fun, or is hacking through line after line of waterskippers (for example) tedious?

2. To read through all the hints and tips on making a good hold scattered about the website.
Try: http://forum.caravelgames.com/viewtopic.php?TopicID=18043
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http://forum.caravelgames.com/viewsiteboard.php?b=47

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11-21-2007 at 06:05 PM
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zadna64
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larrymurk wrote:
Have you played this hold yourself?

It appears that you are making a very easy hold which is ok.

On the first level, roach ranch, 1 South has two doorways that leed nowhere.

When you start the 2nd level you start on a pit and can not move.
i have been told about that by hartleyhair but i have changed it now so i will [ost the new one on soon

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11-21-2007 at 07:34 PM
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Jacob wrote:
The two main suggestions I can give you are:

1. To play test your hold. Can you complete all the rooms (this hold is currently impossible to complete beyond the first room of the second level)? Are they all fun, or is hacking through line after line of waterskippers (for example) tedious?

2. To read through all the hints and tips on making a good hold scattered about the website.
Try: http://forum.caravelgames.com/viewtopic.php?TopicID=18043
and
http://forum.caravelgames.com/viewsiteboard.php?b=47
even i can do the water skippers but i do admit is a little tedious :thumbsup

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11-21-2007 at 07:37 PM
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I have upgraded the hold so it is possible so tell me if it is wrong again. It might be a little easy though.

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11-22-2007 at 07:27 AM
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It was quite easy but i enjoyed playing it.
I think you did a good job on it for a first hold.

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12-14-2007 at 10:02 AM
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Samuel wrote:
It was quite easy but i enjoyed playing it.
I think you did a good job on it for a first hold.

Thanks theres going to be another hold in arcutectchure by me so try that out to

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12-15-2007 at 09:35 PM
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