Nice! Pretty fun hold to play through! And the story is pretty good. Comments:
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×The old well: really easy!
wine cellar: really easy, too!
Cave of boredom: I like this level a lot!
*Entrance: nice!
*1S: I love this room! Run from the bombs!
*1S1E: Pretty good.
*I've seen a lot of rooms like this, but this was good, too.
The cellar:
*Entrance: Good
*1E: has to be my favorite room in level!
*1N: good
*1N1E: pretty good.
*1W: nice!
*1S: Awesome!
Cave of Despair: another of my favorite levels.
Entrance: Great!
1W: A bit hairy, but fun.
1N1W; excellent timer room!
1N: sweet!
2W; pretty good!
Pit of Mud: Good level, too.
Entrance: another good timer room!
1N: O.K, but fun.
2N: Great room!
1N1W: Good room! It even looks cool in the minimap.
1N2W: not bad!
Pit of tar:
Entrance: good.
Secret: Fun room! Nice!
1N: lol, looks a bit fimiliar.
Rest of rooms look fine.
Ice cream cellar: Yes! I love trapdoors!
Entrance: Great!
1N: has an 'under construction' scroll still there.
1E: Good.
2E: pretty challanging!
1N1E: good trapdoor puzzle.
Bonus level: pretty good, mostly guards.
Red seed's lair remind me a bit of Beethro Goes Fourth. Nice level!
Overall, the hold fits the difficulty as stated in the desciptions. I think it's ready to be submitted! Keep these holds coming!!