Anson
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File: A little world.hold (3.2 KB)
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NEW BETA HOLD!
This is a ''just for fun hold''
But i'll add more so its fun and Puzzley So enjoy!
BUT NEVER EDIT IT NEVER!

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Tahnan
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You misspelled "attic". And "library". Also "purple", and I think something else. Also, the "libary" has no exit stairs.

Anson
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Urrr This is a BETA VERSION!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Also Here's a few sneek peaks:
New level: The looooooong keep
Placed: A stair in the libery or what....
New shack
A park!
A hotel (yay!)
And a dugeun!!!!!

More thing's after!
So anyone else wants to comment?

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Tahnan
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Anson wrote:
Urrr This is a BETA VERSION!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Also Here's a few sneek peaks:
New level: The looooooong keep
Placed: A stair in the libery or what....
New shack
A park!
A hotel (yay!)
And a dugeun!!!!!

Yeah. You misspelled "sneak", "peek", "library", and "dungeon". (And there's only one "o" in "long".) I mean, I'm sorry to say it, but honestly, you'll come across much better--as will your hold--if things are spelled right.

Anson
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Hey i'm nine SO NEVER DO THIS OK?
Also it's 2%
Done so wait!

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MeckMeck GRE
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The room "A shack" is not clearable.
The room "A library" is neither clearable nor exitable.
The hold "A little world" is not really playable (yet).

There are many spelling mistakes (like in my holds... ) and no real puzzles (yet). "The lost land" looks a lot more promising... but anyway, I'm looking forward to playing the next version of this hold.

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[Last edited by MeckMeck GRE at 02-10-2007 06:56 PM]

Anson
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MeckMeck GRE wrote:
The room "A shack" is not clearable.
The room "A library" is neither clearable nor exitable.
The hold "A little world" is not really playable (yet).

There are many spelling mistakes (like in my holds... ) and no real puzzles (yet). "The lost land" looks a lot more promising... but anyway, I'm looking forward to playing the next version of this hold.

Sorry this hold is ''cut off''
cos i have alot of holds to work on and this is not one of them

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vittro
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A good idea is to stop working 20 holds at time and concentrate on one. Also fix your spelling and dont use oooooooooo or all caps text to catch attention

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NiroZ
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vittro wrote:
A good idea is to stop working 20 holds at time and concentrate on one. Also fix your spelling and dont use oooooooooo or all caps text to catch attention

Vittro, please. That really isn't helping anyone or anything. All of your points have already been said in some way, shape or form. Everything you have said Anson has done, with the exception of the spelling, but it has defiantly improved.

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[Last edited by NiroZ at 02-20-2007 02:25 AM]

jemann
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NiroZ wrote:
Everything you have said Anson has done, with the exception of the spelling, but it has defiantly improved.

...
"Ha! You all said I couldn't improve, but now I have! Defiantly!"

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[Last edited by jemann at 02-20-2007 03:30 AM]