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I call it "Ducks". Tell me what you think.

Today I went and sat by the pond in the park. I sat silently and watched the ducks swimming around with each other, eating the little bits of bread that some children were throwing at them. I like the pond, because it is a nice quiet place where I can sit and collect my thoughts whilst being near mother nature. As you can tell, I think alot. Most people think i'm wierd and try desperately to avoid me. But some people are nice, like Toby and Jane. Toby and Jane are ducks. Toby has a damaged left wing and Jane has a small beak. I like to sit down by Toby and Jane to talk to them whilst throwing bits of bread at them to show my gratitude.
10-25-2005 at 11:33 PM
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Yup, I like it :D
10-26-2005 at 01:33 AM
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