lyon
Level: Roachling
Rank Points: 13
Registered: 09-14-2010
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File: Old Dungeon V2.hold (21.6 KB)
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Hello to all I'm rhe brother of Lyon and he allow me to put this here.
I have made a lot of holds, all of them bad.I just build for fun, but the best rooms of that holds are coupled here.
Based on Fortress Of Eternity idea (1 level with hard rooms), this is my job of 4 years. I hope all fun .
PD: Made in AE because music is better(for me)than TCB while you are building
EDIT: Hold reupload, now anyone can see it

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[Last edited by lyon at 09-24-2010 04:55 PM]

brian_s
Level: Smitemaster

Rank Points: 587
Registered: 05-27-2004
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Most of the rooms are very good, in a classic style like many of the old DROD:AE holds. Some rooms do have problems however:

1E: After conquering 1E, you cannot get through 1S1E. The red door where the wraithwings used to be is in the way. Removing the red door where the force arrows are should eliminate that problem.

2S4E: The shape of the walls around the tar mother in the southeast corner make it impossible to get to her. Making the tar three tiles tall by removing a few walls should fix this.

4E: I cannot hit the orb in the southeast corner in the small room while the goblin is with me. The most I can do is break the crumbly wall. If the room was taller (3x5 instead of 3x4) then I can safely hit the orb.

3S: I think it would be better to replace the two tar babies on the western edge of the room with a green door.

3S1W: You have a blob of tar extending above the green door. This winds up creating an inaccessible tar baby above the green door. Extending the green door to fill that space should fix the problem.

1S1W: It is impossible to get to the tar mother because there are no accessible flat spots in the tar.

lyon
Level: Roachling
Rank Points: 13
Registered: 09-14-2010
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Thanks for comment it and say that, I'm greatful if you say the rooms are good . Well changes :

-Error of 1E to 1S 1E have been fixed
-Error of 2S 4E have been fixed changing a bit the room.
-Error of 1S 1W have been fixed, i added some eyes and snakes, so the room is now a little more difficult
-Six new rooms in the level, one is by me now, five from others holds

That's all ,if someone play it, i ask him for the rating and difficult. Thanks if you use the time on my hold (I'm the brother of Lyon).
EDIT : I'm trying hardly conquer my own hold, i saw that a entrance was blocked, now is fixed sorry

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[Last edited by lyon at 09-24-2010 04:56 PM]