minimike98
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This is a cool hold i just created it only has the spirit world but it is awsome im macking some more levels and rooms but this is all iv got sorry i hope you enjoy

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Samuel
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Again, nice use of custom graphics. Nice brain/aumtlich monster, I call it the Bramtlich! I was confused about that monster until I saw the orange beams, a good puzzle, dodging the beams whilst killing them off. I can't really comment on anything else.

EDIT: I just edited the game so I could reach 1S. Please stop using the five squiggly lines as a teleport, it's much easier to use stairs, or create a nicer custom graphic than a few wobbly lines for a teleporter.

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minimike98
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Ok i well mack another teleporter kind what about this one

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Thats much better, good job.

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Okay, apparently you didn't get the hint first time. Use stairs and don't use horrible custom graphics! Use the frigging stock graphics for swords if all you can create is a seven-line figure with a white fill! Also, where's the challenge?

0/10 difficulty, 2/10 overall.
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Samuel wrote:
EDIT: I just edited the game so I could reach 1S. Please stop using the five squiggly lines as a teleport, it's much easier to use stairs, or create a nicer custom graphic than a few wobbly lines for a teleporter.

Sorry, it's entirely possible to reach 1S without editing it. There's that platform...

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minimike98
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Well this is my secend update i have a question are my holds good or bad?

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Beat the second part in about a minute. And USE STAIRS!
Score is still the same.

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minimike98
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No stairs are to big i would use teleporters stairs way to big And what spirit worlds has stairs going down it would just be wired

Someone Else
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Ok. I don't think that you get the point here. People are saying that they don't like something in your hold. May I refer you to here? This is a good example of why you should listen to the people here on architecture. I haven't played your hold, but the impression I get is that it's a poorly designed work that has annoying features.

In summary, if everyone is telling you that something about your hold is bad, you should listen to them.

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No im not going to use stairs and thats finale no more posts about stuped stairs ensted of teleporters

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...
this just isn't worth it anymore. If you're going to completely ignore everyone, then you deserve everything bad that's coming. Don't say I didn't warn you.

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I threw poo at people. They told me to stop. I told them I was going to keep attempting to refine my technique.

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Samuel
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Finished the second part. A nice little addition to the game. I like the idea that you only have 1 HP left so be careful what you do

Personally, I think that the teleporter is a good idea. Look at my comparison:

Dungeon/Hold/Internal Game=Stairs .
Spirit World=Teleporter .

Can you see how it ties in?

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John Lennon

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I've just played it, and if this was my hold I wouldn't have used stairs as well.

I don't see any problems with this part of the hold, except that sometimes I have to guess what I was supposed to be doing.

A bad architect will do everything the players say. A good architect can decide for him/herself if a request will make the hold better.

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Well hears my next update on the hold hope you enjoy

Samuel
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1S3E: Impossible.

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minimike98
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No its not i did it in like 10 sec remember genarators can be shilds thats probly your prodlem

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minimike98 wrote:
No its not I did it in like 10 seconds, remember, genarators can be shields thats probably your problem

What are Generators?

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John Lennon

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The brains

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Oh yeah, solved it.

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John Lennon

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Hears a little bit more of my hold hope you enjoy

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Pretty interesting idea, and the custom graphics are nice, could be a LOT more polished but it's nice to see people doing something new. Also interesting idea with the generator puzzles, I would like to see more especially some more puzzles where you have to make a decision as to where it is best to loose your health. If you have a lot of the puzzles and limit the amount of potions laying around you could have a very very nice hold coming along here. Keep at it!

minimike98
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Well hears a nother update on my hold hope you enjoy

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Tim wrote:
A bad architect will do everything the players say. A good architect can decide for him/herself if a request will make the hold better.

That's quite true. I just think that if everyone (which is no longer true) except the architect believes that something is badly made, the architect should change it. Perhaps I didn't wait long enough before saying what I did, and for that I apologize.

You should change the plane sword to have the imperative "Ghost display", but don't change any other part of its code.
I must say, I fairly liked this, except for the linearity of the hold. It definitely has some potential.

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