Both of you are probably doing my intended solution, just being kind of confusing about where in the solution you are (i.e., just getting it started vs. the middle of the room). Basically...
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×the first thing I do is use the mimics to kill the initial eyes, then maneuver a bit until they are lined up directly vertically with me. Then I get into a pattern of moving up twice, right once, down twice, and swinging when appropriate, for example. Continue until you get to the "trap" where the diagonal-looking eyes can see, carefully move through that area, then continue to the end, after which you wake the diagonal eyes and kill them at the openings in the trapdoors easily. I must confess, every time I tested I died at the "trap" section, even though I thought I knew which squares to avoid...I kind of felt bad, but really, eyes are so predictable that I think they're one of the purest DROD puzzle elements in many ways.
Glad you're enjoying it so far!
Game on,
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