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Hello.
This is my first rpg hold (demo). It's short and easy yet, but I decided to post it. I want you to tell me what am I doig good and wrong (I know, I know, not many choices but I'm not very good at this and I like holds with lot of scripting :P) So, enjoy!

PS Luigi is a stalwart from Italian :P

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10-06-2008 at 07:01 PM
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A couple of things.

1. The first "choice" is poorly done--it has an immediate "Sigh. I'll go back and restore now" effect.

2. It's really easy to exploit the pickaxe in the brain room.

3. Give us ending stairs!

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10-07-2008 at 01:33 AM
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Sorry for late reply.
1. Done. ("wrong" paths with gems and health potions)
2. Done. It's in new secret room.
3. Done.

I will make more rooms (levels?) and post a new version ;)

PS Only 1 reply? :(

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Hmm... I found the hold wierd. No challange, wierd story, anoying forced choises without knowing what lay ahead.

What makes the hold enjoyable in your own opinion?

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10-10-2008 at 11:40 AM
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