Suggestions for improvement of spelling and grammar
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"Thank you for being "warrior" of my new attracktion - arena!" should be "Thank you for being a gladiator in my new attraction - the arena!"
"Who has the most money from you, dear visitors?" should be "Who has the most money among you, dear visitors?"
"How much will you rate this guy in the centre?" I think you mean "How much will you bet on this guy in the centre?"
"Very few. About 3,000,000,000 greckles only." should be "Very little. Only about 3,000,000,000 greckles."
"This round is tutorial-like. It will simply introduce you to arena..." Here, tutorial is the wrong word. You mean that it's easy, not that you're going to teach someone how to play. What about, "This round will simply introduce you to the arena."
"He doesn't cost even 3,000,000,000 greckles!" should be "He's not worth even 3,000,000,000 greckles!"
"2,000,000 greckles that he'll die now!" should be "2,000,000 greckles says that he'll die now!"
"Congraitulations, Slayer!.." should be "Congratulations, Slayer!"
"You got this round!" should be "You won this round!"
"You...you're succeed!!! " should be "You... you've succeeded!"
"D-do it, quickly, until I'm so kind!" I don't know what you mean here. This may be an idiom that doesn't translate literally.
Entrance Texts
"What did mad Cludo say the Slayer before starting ROUND1... " should be "What did mad Cludo say to the Slayer..." or "What did mad Cludo tell the Slayer..."
"I hope new round will be as easy as last two..." should be "I hope the new round will be as easy as the last two."
"I must be very careful. One mistake - and I'm a deadman." should be "I must be very careful. One mistake, and I'm a dead man."
End Hold Message
"Well, Slayer left Cludo's arena and never returned there. And mad Cludo found another, less lucky, guy, I think..." Should be "Well, the Slayer left Cludo's arena and never returned. And mad Cludo found another less lucky guy, I think."