The Architest
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Fully tested hold what contain 4 levels (1 Cutscene Level)

You play as Evil Eye who searchs new home

Evil eye graphic created by Vittro

Give some points to Vittro

Come on!

vittro
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Testing now.

You can't get to 1S if you conquer Entrance and leave it.

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mxvladi
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vittro wrote:
Testing now.

You can't get to 1S if you conquer Entrance and leave it.

Indeed. Architest, pls put power token somewhere near by northern tunnel, too, so evil eye can return.

mxvladi
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Also, Architest, you was said that "Anyone edit" is the best edit requiments to hold which is in progress.

mxvladi
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How 'm supposed to solve 1E?

EDIT: Nevermind, just those clones looked like usual evil eyes!

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[Last edited by mxvladi at 07-26-2008 12:00 PM]

mxvladi
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Now I've solved first level.

Etrance: first time I thought I need to press plate by myself, when suddenly found out that I have mirror...
1E: Pretty nice room - keeping roaches from pressing trap-plates is pretty tricky(best room I ever saw from you).
1W: Well, the only thing I don't like is that there're no checkpoints - everything else is fine.
1S: If it's unrequired it's OK that you can't get it after conquering etrance... but if it's required pls either make it unrequired or put token to the northern part of etrance.

Now going to the swamp...

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Now I've solved Swamp.

1E: Pretty good room. BTW, wubba is unrequired, so I let adder eat it.
1W: Wohoo! I didn't know that mirrors can stop fuses! Well done!

The Architest
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Im sorry

Ohh...Mxvladi,remember find secret at Swamps!

mxvladi
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Now I've conquered the hold.

Rosy Happyland

1N: Good room. My only suggestion is to put at least one checkpoint there.
1W: Well, although I know this trick with standing sworded NPC's and snakes, but it still seems me quite inventive. Also, I used only one mirror to kill serpent.

mxvladi
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The Architest wrote:
Ohh...Mxvladi,remember find secret at Swamps!

Aargh! Still working on it!

mxvladi
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mxvladi wrote:

The Architest wrote:
Ohh...Mxvladi,remember find secret at Swamps!

Aargh! Still working on it!

Aand done! This sercet room is really evil. (the best room I ever saw from you)

mxvladi
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O.K. Architest, the only thing I strongly advice now is to create more rooms. It will make hold more enjoyable. Espesially if you will do puzzles like you did.

Keep doing holds like this!

mxvladi
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Ummm... I don't understand cutscene. Why Beethro is speaker(while he's not in the room)? I really don't understand.

The Architest
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This cutscene is based on Fegundos...and their sad destiny!

Beethro the Evil Delver manipulates Fegundos to their doom,but one fegundo attacks to beethro:O

Well,I wont understand my cutscene either

mxvladi
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The Architest wrote:
This cutscene is based on Fegundos...and their sad destiny!

Beethro the Evil Delver manipulates Fegundos to their doom,but one fegundo attacks to beethro:O

But there's no Beethro - there's evil eye there!

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Umm....dammit!

´Hmm..Evil Eye the Evil Eye is manipulation fegudnos:

The Architest
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Should I put it to Holds now?

mxvladi
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Ummm... haven't I said that it's better to create more rooms?

Although if you want, you can.

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*new version*

Play & Rate!

mxvladi
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Okay, I see that changes you was asked to do are done. Now contact Schik and ask him to put this on holds board as new version.

Tim
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Let me just quote from the friendly HA thread:

So my hold just got promoted to the Holds board, and I suddenly realized that I need to change something. What do I do?

Hold admins are also in charge of approving hold updates. We try to be as reasonable as possible, but remember that by the time we see it, the hold was supposed to be finished. If you just don't like the hold anymore, and want to change it, then tough cookies. You should have been sure before you submitted it. If, however, we screwed up, and let a playability issue pass through, then we'll attempt to fix the problem together with you, doing the least amount of modification to a room as possible. UNINTENDED SOLUTIONS ARE NOT A PLAYABILITY ISSUE. You have been warned. On the other hand, if it's a textual/speech/artistic change only, then we're probably going to be nice and approve it. We do have ways to see if you're trying to sneak more changes in, so no lying. That's bad.

The Architest
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Schnik is going to do something

Schik
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I told you I'd ask the HAs what this was about.

We generally only allow hold updates for a couple reasons:
1) Game logic changed, breaking your hold
2) The HAs screwed up and missed something

This appears to be neither of those. Read the text that Tim quoted, and live and learn. Take a little more time with your next hold.

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Tim
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To be clear, I don't think your hold is bad. It is much better than your first hold.

I'm sure your next hold is going to be even better than this one.

The Architest
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Thanks