Samuel
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File: King Samuels Dungeon 1.1.4.hold (23 KB)
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Hello everybody,

This is a project i have been working one for at least 2 months now. And i have done three of the main levels and one of the secret levels. Please give me feedback when you can. Thank you

Levels Finished:

Outer Gardens
Dungeon Level 1
Dungeon Level 2
Dungeon Level 3

Levels Creating:

Dungeon Level 4
Governor Tapraw's Palace

Attached Version 1.0.1
Attached Version 1.0.2
Attached Version 1.0.3
Attached Version 1.0.4
Attached Version 1.0.5
Attached Version 1.0.6
Attached Version 1.0.7
Attached Version 1.0.8
Attached Version 1.0.9
Attached Version 1.1.0
Attached Version 1.1.1
Attached Version 1.1.2
Attached Version 1.1.3
Attached Version 1.1.4

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I believe in everything until it's
disproved. So I believe in fairies,
the myths, dragons. It all exists,
even if it's in your mind. Who's to
say that dreams and nightmares
aren't as real as the here and now?
John Lennon

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[Last edited by Samuel at 05-26-2008 11:16 PM : Attached Version 1.1.4 and updated the what to do pile]

Samuel
Level: Delver

Rank Points: 69
Registered: 07-08-2007
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I can see that people have downloaded this, but it has been over two days and no one has commented, so could someone please comment?

____________________________
I believe in everything until it's
disproved. So I believe in fairies,
the myths, dragons. It all exists,
even if it's in your mind. Who's to
say that dreams and nightmares
aren't as real as the here and now?
John Lennon

625th Stalwart
Level: Roachling
Rank Points: 13
Registered: 01-06-2008
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File: King Samuels Dungeon 1.00 Notes.txt (1008 bytes)
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Here, i have played through the hold and here are the errors i fou

Samuel
Level: Delver

Rank Points: 69
Registered: 07-08-2007
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File: King Samuels Dungeon 1.01.hold (21.8 KB)
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New Version, fixed all the bugs that were listed.

____________________________
I believe in everything until it's
disproved. So I believe in fairies,
the myths, dragons. It all exists,
even if it's in your mind. Who's to
say that dreams and nightmares
aren't as real as the here and now?
John Lennon

625th Stalwart
Level: Roachling
Rank Points: 13
Registered: 01-06-2008
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File: King Samuels Dungeon 1.01 Notes.txt (174 bytes)
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Well not all the bugs..... Read my new notes

Samuel
Level: Delver

Rank Points: 69
Registered: 07-08-2007
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New Version, i have fixed all the bugs on the list.

____________________________
I believe in everything until it's
disproved. So I believe in fairies,
the myths, dragons. It all exists,
even if it's in your mind. Who's to
say that dreams and nightmares
aren't as real as the here and now?
John Lennon

Samuel
Level: Delver

Rank Points: 69
Registered: 07-08-2007
IP: Logged

File: King Samuels Dungeon 1.0.3.hold (20.8 KB)
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New Version, i apreciate 625th Stalwart for checking my hold but i need more than one person, so can some other people please look at this?!

____________________________
I believe in everything until it's
disproved. So I believe in fairies,
the myths, dragons. It all exists,
even if it's in your mind. Who's to
say that dreams and nightmares
aren't as real as the here and now?
John Lennon

hartleyhair
Level: Smiter
Rank Points: 307
Registered: 08-05-2007
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I'll comment:

First, there are numerous spelling and grammar issues in this Hold. English is a tricky little language, so it's often a good idea to copy-paste the Hold's text into a spellchecker.

Now, the rooms:

Dungeon Level 1: Entrance: Please, please differentiate between path and non-path. I was frequently bumping into walls, which were very similar in colour to the floor.

1W: You don't need to set of the bombs to hit the orb - there's nothing stopping you doing it.

1N1W: There's no real challenge here.

1E: Sorry, this is ridiculous. I do not want to slice through masses of tarstuff every time I need to leave the room.


More later.

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I'm currently working on Jerrik's Dungeon, an oldschool Hold for TCB.

Samuel
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Newer Version, fixed all of the bugs that hartleyhair mentioned.

____________________________
I believe in everything until it's
disproved. So I believe in fairies,
the myths, dragons. It all exists,
even if it's in your mind. Who's to
say that dreams and nightmares
aren't as real as the here and now?
John Lennon

625th Stalwart
Level: Roachling
Rank Points: 13
Registered: 01-06-2008
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Here are some notes for the newer version

Edit: And now i have attached them

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[Last edited by 625th Stalwart at 01-13-2008 01:42 AM]

Mr. Slice
Level: Disabled
Rank Points: 140
Registered: 10-26-2007
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Make sure you added the text file you wanted to add.

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"To see or to hear is to know, but to
do is to understand"

Samuel
Level: Delver

Rank Points: 69
Registered: 07-08-2007
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File: King Samuels Dungeon 1.0.5.hold (20.7 KB)
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Here is Version 1.0.5

____________________________
I believe in everything until it's
disproved. So I believe in fairies,
the myths, dragons. It all exists,
even if it's in your mind. Who's to
say that dreams and nightmares
aren't as real as the here and now?
John Lennon

Samuel
Level: Delver

Rank Points: 69
Registered: 07-08-2007
IP: Logged

File: King Samuels Dungeon 1.0.6.hold (21.4 KB)
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Woah! After that kind of Critisisim i wasn't gonna post anything anymore, but i overcame it, ok, new version. And with what Nuntars suggested very soon i think there will be a 1.0.7.

Edit: Oh and this project might not be updated for 2 to 3 days as my parents are going to sydney and i am staying with my grandparents. I will try to introduce my grandfather to DROD so he can let me use it, then i will see if i can use the net. But don't be suprised if you don't see anymore work on this for 2 to 3 days.

____________________________
I believe in everything until it's
disproved. So I believe in fairies,
the myths, dragons. It all exists,
even if it's in your mind. Who's to
say that dreams and nightmares
aren't as real as the here and now?
John Lennon

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[Last edited by Samuel at 01-15-2008 04:59 AM]

Samuel
Level: Delver

Rank Points: 69
Registered: 07-08-2007
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I'm back from my grandparents house and i can now come back to work on King Samuel's Dungeon. Version 1.0.7 will be coming soon.

____________________________
I believe in everything until it's
disproved. So I believe in fairies,
the myths, dragons. It all exists,
even if it's in your mind. Who's to
say that dreams and nightmares
aren't as real as the here and now?
John Lennon

625th Stalwart
Level: Roachling
Rank Points: 13
Registered: 01-06-2008
IP: Logged

Here are some notes on the new version

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[Last edited by 625th Stalwart at 01-19-2008 02:09 AM]

625th Stalwart
Level: Roachling
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It won't let me attatch my notes, i'll just post them on this message then:

Dungeon Level 1:

1W: Too many roach queens at the top of the room
1E: Could use a checkpoint or two
1N1E: The Orb that is closest to the bottom of the room opens the door next to it but toggles the door that is in front of it
2N1W: Impossible

More as i go on

Samuel
Level: Delver

Rank Points: 69
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File: King Samuels Dungeon 1.0.7.hold (22.1 KB)
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Here is Version 1.0.7

____________________________
I believe in everything until it's
disproved. So I believe in fairies,
the myths, dragons. It all exists,
even if it's in your mind. Who's to
say that dreams and nightmares
aren't as real as the here and now?
John Lennon

Samuel
Level: Delver

Rank Points: 69
Registered: 07-08-2007
IP: Logged

File: King Samuels Dungeon 1.0.8.hold (22.1 KB)
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Ok, Version 1.0.8 is now released, oh and Nuntar. Sorry for what i said about with the critisisim you gave me a new verison would be here soon, i was just very worked up that day.

____________________________
I believe in everything until it's
disproved. So I believe in fairies,
the myths, dragons. It all exists,
even if it's in your mind. Who's to
say that dreams and nightmares
aren't as real as the here and now?
John Lennon

625th Stalwart
Level: Roachling
Rank Points: 13
Registered: 01-06-2008
IP: Logged

Here are some notes on version 1.0.8

Dungeon Level 2:


Entrance: Every time you enter the room the mud coordinator is there, you should putan end command on his script
1N1W: Worst room i have ever played in my entire DROD life, impossible too.
1E: Very boring room
2S3W: All you have to do is kill the tar mother and hold down 5, not a very exciting concept for a room
1S: What is the point of Halph being here?

More Later

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[Last edited by 625th Stalwart at 01-19-2008 03:55 AM]

Samuel
Level: Delver

Rank Points: 69
Registered: 07-08-2007
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File: King Samuels Dungeon 1.0.9.hold (20.6 KB)
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Here is the new version

____________________________
I believe in everything until it's
disproved. So I believe in fairies,
the myths, dragons. It all exists,
even if it's in your mind. Who's to
say that dreams and nightmares
aren't as real as the here and now?
John Lennon

625th Stalwart
Level: Roachling
Rank Points: 13
Registered: 01-06-2008
IP: Logged

Here are some notes for version 1.0.9

Dungeon Level 1:

2N1W: All you have to do is hold down five and wait for a roach to step on the pressure plate to open all the doors
2N1E: The orb closest to the bottom of the room opens both doors
1S1W: If there is a master wall bloacking the stairs that go into a library that tells you tips about the dungeon then there is really no point, because if someone has completed the dungeon they don't want to know any tips because they don't need them.

Dungeon Level 2:

2S3W: Okay, i said there were too many Stalwarts, but you took away too many, either put some back or take some slayers away.
3S2W: There are no walls blocking you from going outside the pathway.

More Later

Samuel
Level: Delver

Rank Points: 69
Registered: 07-08-2007
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Beacuse we are about to go to version 1.1.0 i am going to wait until i can finish Dungeon Level 3 before i release 1.1.0.

____________________________
I believe in everything until it's
disproved. So I believe in fairies,
the myths, dragons. It all exists,
even if it's in your mind. Who's to
say that dreams and nightmares
aren't as real as the here and now?
John Lennon

Samuel
Level: Delver

Rank Points: 69
Registered: 07-08-2007
IP: Logged

File: King Samuels Dungeon 1.1.0..hold (24.6 KB)
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Ok finished, version 1.1.0. is finally out

____________________________
I believe in everything until it's
disproved. So I believe in fairies,
the myths, dragons. It all exists,
even if it's in your mind. Who's to
say that dreams and nightmares
aren't as real as the here and now?
John Lennon

Anson
Level: Delver
Rank Points: 67
Registered: 02-05-2007
IP: Logged

Ummmn, Samuel... (No offense) You realilise that some people (like me) have bad architecture becuase you didnt do much of other peoples holds?

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Please, I admire Guthix, I solve problems, I fix rules too. I used to be a Scoundril, Complaining about the forums, But now i changed.

Samuel
Level: Delver

Rank Points: 69
Registered: 07-08-2007
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Anson wrote:
Ummmn, Samuel... (No offense) You realilise that some people (like me) have bad architecture becuase you didnt do much of other peoples holds?

I understand everything but "You realilise that some people (like me) have bad architecture becuase you didnt do much of other peoples holds?"

I didn't understand the thing that other people had bad architecture because of me, and i don't get the why i didin't do anything in other peoples holds. So can you please explain it?

____________________________
I believe in everything until it's
disproved. So I believe in fairies,
the myths, dragons. It all exists,
even if it's in your mind. Who's to
say that dreams and nightmares
aren't as real as the here and now?
John Lennon

Samuel
Level: Delver

Rank Points: 69
Registered: 07-08-2007
IP: Logged

Oh! ok, well i'll do just that, i'm off to the holds board!

____________________________
I believe in everything until it's
disproved. So I believe in fairies,
the myths, dragons. It all exists,
even if it's in your mind. Who's to
say that dreams and nightmares
aren't as real as the here and now?
John Lennon

625th Stalwart
Level: Roachling
Rank Points: 13
Registered: 01-06-2008
IP: Logged

Well since no one else is reportig the bugs in 1.1.0 i guess i will. Here are some bugs in version 1.1.0.

Outer Gardens:

In the story part of the entrance on the card it says Peethro Nudkin, and then when you talk to King Samuel he says Beethro Budkin, maybe you should make him forget his name again and make Beethro correct him. Otherwise there is really no point in at the strat King Samuel calling him Peethro Nudkin.


Dungeon Level 1:

1N: Not many people like the "Hold down ctrl q the whole time and then go to the next room" type of room in a hold, either delete this room or modify it to make it more fun to play.

2N: Same with this room, the only difference is you strike the orb and then hold down ctrl q. So either delete this room or modify it.

1S1W: The stairs exit the hold. Is this because the library of secrets is not finished yet or is it a mistake?


Dungeon Level 2:

1N1W: Hack and Slash! Hack and Slash! Also known as Boring not Fun! Boring not Fun! Please, Please, Please, Please!!! Change this room, it is very very very boring.




Dungeon Level 3:
1E: At the top if you go through the passage to the far left you end up on a green door. So there are two ways in and out of the room.

2N1E: This room could use a couple of checkpoints
1E: When you come back ino this room you have to clear the tar every time, which is kind of boring.

1W: You cannot go over the force arrow and reach the mud as it is over a pit which makes the room impossible

2S: Impossible

This is all i am going to report until all the bugs are fixed.

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[Last edited by 625th Stalwart at 01-24-2008 01:07 AM : I put something in the wrong spot]

Samuel
Level: Delver

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File: King Samuels Dungeon 1.1.1.hold (24.8 KB)
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Great, i am pretty sure that i have fixed all the bugs that were reported. here is version 1.1.1

____________________________
I believe in everything until it's
disproved. So I believe in fairies,
the myths, dragons. It all exists,
even if it's in your mind. Who's to
say that dreams and nightmares
aren't as real as the here and now?
John Lennon

Samuel
Level: Delver

Rank Points: 69
Registered: 07-08-2007
IP: Logged

I have deleed the library of screts and i am replacing it with a wraitythwing cave, it may take me a while to put up the new version, as i am going to finish the wraithwing cave and level 4 of King Samuel's Dungeon before i post 1.1.2, but i still am accepting reports on bugs.

____________________________
I believe in everything until it's
disproved. So I believe in fairies,
the myths, dragons. It all exists,
even if it's in your mind. Who's to
say that dreams and nightmares
aren't as real as the here and now?
John Lennon

Samuel
Level: Delver

Rank Points: 69
Registered: 07-08-2007
IP: Logged

File: King Samuels Dungeon 1.1.2..hold (22.9 KB)
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Here is version 1.1.2, please comment on bugs very soon as i am ready to submit this

____________________________
I believe in everything until it's
disproved. So I believe in fairies,
the myths, dragons. It all exists,
even if it's in your mind. Who's to
say that dreams and nightmares
aren't as real as the here and now?
John Lennon