zadna64
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This is my second hold and I hope you like it. If you could give me any advice to improve it. Which would be appretcheated(is it the right spelling?)

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Cheesecake!

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[Last edited by zadna64 at 12-15-2007 09:27 PM]

Samuel
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I really enjoyed this! I think you have come a long way already from Monster Ville. This is really really really good. I found one flaw in the game though. When you enter a room there are you and another guy talking about your company. You should put an 'End' on that command so we don't have to see it every time we walk in that room

Other than that good job!!

PS. Is this the one you were telling me about on the Monster Ville thread?

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I believe in everything until it's
disproved. So I believe in fairies,
the myths, dragons. It all exists,
even if it's in your mind. Who's to
say that dreams and nightmares
aren't as real as the here and now?
John Lennon

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[Last edited by Samuel at 12-17-2007 08:21 AM : Forgot the PS bit]

zadna64
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Samuel wrote:
I really enjoyed this! I think you have come a long way already from Monster Ville. This is really really really good. I found one flaw in the game though. When you enter a room there are you and another guy talking about your company. You should put an 'End' on that command so we don't have to see it every time we walk in that room

Other than that good job!!

PS. Is this the one you were telling me about on the Monster Ville thread?

yes

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Cheesecake!