Yeah, this is a pretty nice hold, which I think is worth getting published. Here's some thoughts on the levels:
Level 1: I generally don't see where the name came from, but whatever. There are some really good puzzles in here that I haven't seen used before like: 1N1W. 1E had an excellent technique to it. And the Brair room was great, too.
Level 2: Some more good puzzles. I hadn't seen anything like 1E before. 1N1E looks a bit familiar (from one of your other holds?) 2N was kinda long, but fun. The guards room was o.k, but got a bit crazy! 1N1W was fun, and I beat most of the room when I realized I had to move the clones in perfect position. 1W was crazy fun, too!
Level 3: Entrance was pretty fun too. 1E was excellent! Rest of the rooms were pretty good too!
Overall, this is a pretty good hold! My only complaint is that it is a little too messy looking. But, I've learned not to judge a book by it's cover!
![:D :D](emoticons/grin.gif)
Keep going bomber!