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I'm sure most of you remember my first hold, Zonhin's tutorial. I just finished the sequel but I feel like somethings missing, but I don't know what. Can you guys help me?

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05-04-2007 at 02:02 AM
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Well, you didn't mention tarstuff switchers, broken orbs, pressure plates (although you did use them...), stalwarts, gel babies, gel mothers, citizens or builders.

And is it safe to assume that the Level 16 stairs are not supposed to end the hold?

And waterskipper nests do NOT spawn a waterskipper every turn... (Level 13 : 4 North).


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05-04-2007 at 03:00 AM
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Okay, I fixed all of my stupid mistakes.

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Gel babies still aren't mentioned in any real way, although the mothers are. Might be nice to indicate the different movement, if nothing else.

The hold strongly implied that platforms are specifically for water. I'm pretty sure that's not the case, given all the pits with platforms in TCB.

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05-04-2007 at 08:33 AM
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Here's my review of the hold so far.

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Okay, I fixed it.

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05-06-2007 at 12:52 AM
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Nice hold!

Only one small bug:

In Level 15 3N1E, you can exit east before you kill the Litches, and then you could just go down the stairs. My suggestion: make 3N2E un-required, and add a blue door in before the stairs.

Level 16 4N1W: There's no need for a speed potion. :)

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05-06-2007 at 02:19 PM
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Fixed.

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05-06-2007 at 04:38 PM
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Coupl'a things.
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None of these are essential for hold promotion, but I think that they should be changed for this being a tutorial hold.

Overall, I think this is a good, brief tutorial hold for somebody who has played JtRH. However, I don't feel qualified to comment, precisely, as I've beaten TCB.

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05-08-2007 at 05:06 AM
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Quick spell check...

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05-08-2007 at 10:28 PM
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Darn watterskippers.

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