So, Dali, as I promised I start playing your hold again from the beginning. As you said the hold is almost ready for publishing and here are my comments for final tuning for levels 1-3. I need one more day and I will post for the rest.
Level One:
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×1N: Script problem. If you kill the roach, even if you are suck Beethro says “Ouf, It’s OK” which is not the case. I think the problem is in the “if” statement. If it’s not satisfied then moves to the next line, e.g. the Label. Put a goto additional label in order to avoid this.
3N2E: The best room in the level
Level Two:
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×1S1E: I solved the room already but I think for the ordinary player a scroll with a small hint will be OK.
2S: The best room.
2S2E: OK, I don’t want to be offensive but this room is not correct. The second time I played was only because I have my demo. The room is not bad at all, just it don’t covers the general idea of the hold. May be because I didn’t get the scroll. It’ true, that almost all of the holds have such a room but if I have to be honest, I don’t like it.
Level Three:
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×1N1W: The best room
2W: I saw the number.
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×What about the eyes out of the red area?
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×The secret room: It is impossible to turn back after you solve it. Do fix it!
2E: Original!
3N: I like it. Yes, I do!
OK, this is so far. I will post again when I finish the other levels.